Dave_Cage Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 ok guys this is my first caw so, please be nice i just need a little help what do you guys think needs to be done **UPDATE** [img]http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p281/Dave_Cage/punkbodyfinished.jpg[/img][img]http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p281/Dave_Cage/punkfacefinished.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nevermore. Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 uum work on the facial hair.. did you make the "X"'s on his hand tape? And the eyebrows need fixing. heres a pic to help. [img]http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h99/lil_nath/cm.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvolutionIV Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 Chane Body skin maybe? Punk's not that ripped, change eyebrows also and maybe hair. Keep working on the tats as well, you're missing a lot of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave_Cage Posted November 13, 2006 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 thanks for the tips guys, added to the caw the things you guys suggested **Not Most Recent** (Most Recent is in post 1) -eyebrows are redone (thicker, different type, slightly lower, more angling) -X is now on the hands -facial hair redone (started again and just went by the picture posted) -chest tattoo slightly changed -1 tattoo added to right arm (spider) -2 tattoo's added to left arm (some tattoo paterns) -body less ripped here is the new body image [img]http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p281/Dave_Cage/body-2.jpg[/img] anyway with the hair... this year there is a really lame selection, here is a few possibilities (dont worry about the colours... they are the default ones), make a choice when you post if you could guys 1)[img]http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p281/Dave_Cage/hair5.jpg[/img]2)[img]http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p281/Dave_Cage/hair4.jpg[/img]3)[img]http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p281/Dave_Cage/hair3.jpg[/img] 4)[img]http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p281/Dave_Cage/hair2.jpg[/img]5)[img]http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p281/Dave_Cage/hair1.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theclashrocker Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 [quote name='Man of 1000 CAWs' post='882824' date='Nov 13 2006, 02:45 AM']Chane Body skin maybe? Punk's not that ripped, change eyebrows also and maybe hair. Keep working on the tats as well, you're missing a lot of them.[/quote] He's got the abs perfect. Look at the refrence pic (lil_nath's post) and his ab choice. the stomach has two places on both sides where it goes in and his ribs are slightly shown, looks good so far. and damn I hate the hair choices this year and I don't even have the game yet... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stormer Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 Just make the nose and lips a bit thinner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvolutionIV Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 I'd say maybe Hair #2 and you might wanna keep looking for a better stomach tattoo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brummi666 Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 Thats a good begin! other Facialhair! but the Face is good please Formula Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~{nWo4Life}~ Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 holy crap. that is a very good start. that attire is looking awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TEve Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 That is looking really good, a bit more work on the face and then please post the formula. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A-Dizzle Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 Ok, face/facial hair looking really good now. I would go with hair #2 myself. The arm tattoo's look good from what I can see and the main problem you've got now is the "Straight Edge" tattoo on his stomach. Players on the Xbox version, should be able to do it themselves, by just spelling it out, letter-by-letter, but for you, I don't think there are any good designs in the game for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jbarrett777 Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 CM PunK! Really wanna make him. I don't like the new tatoo, prefer t'other one. And hair choice, 3rd on along on first row. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.TheDarkKnight Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 That is really good for your 1st Caw. All I could suggest is that you work on the body morphing and edit it from your origonal face - Other then that great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N7 Joseph Shepard Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 thats not just good for a first try, thats great for a first try, maybe add a little more for the mustach i guess, either way 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave_Cage Posted November 13, 2006 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 thanks alot for all the comments it really helps i have added a new image to the first post, thats the latest one -changed body morphing -hair#3 as hair#2 went too far down the back on the shortest length -re-did stomach tattoo -changed the nose and the mouth so they are thinner do you guys think i should post the formular? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A-Dizzle Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 hmm, sure. It's really up to you. I think there's something a little up with it still but I'm not sure what. It's probably just the tattoo's though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
James23 The Legend Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 dude, looks nothing like him, and you're missing alot of tattoes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Syxx Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 [quote name='James23' post='884368' date='Nov 13 2006, 09:10 PM']dude, looks nothing like him, and you're missing alot of tattoes[/quote] Way to put a guy down. I personally think it's very good for a first try. Keep up the good work, you can only improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(-FTS-) Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 Choice 3 looks best for him just work on colors and work on tats cuz they suck but a good start Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
James23 The Legend Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 dude, good try? you have to be a hard ass! dont be a woman! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
(-FTS-) Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 [quote name='James23' post='884420' date='Nov 13 2006, 09:19 PM']dude, good try? you have to be a hard ass! dont be a woman![/quote] WTF does that suppose to mean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A-Dizzle Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 James23, all you seem to do is post "this caw sucks etc etc" in threads. Perhaps, if you bothered to mention how they could improve on a CAW rather than just insulting them. Also, why insult them at all. Just keep your oppinions to yourself or even if you have to post, at least tell them what to improve on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxLiponxX Posted November 13, 2006 Report Share Posted November 13, 2006 The face needs work, that's all. Nice caw. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tyler rizâ„¢ Posted November 14, 2006 Report Share Posted November 14, 2006 the face isn't that tall and skinny. work on the tat's as well. use a word design on his abs instead of a radom design. good start though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperThinWalls Posted November 14, 2006 Report Share Posted November 14, 2006 Work on his eyes, brow, jaw, and his tattoos. I think hair choice 2 is the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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