.:: Topical Flows ::.

[Jin]

[center][b][u][color="red"][size=24]TOPICAL CYPHERING[/size][/color][/u][/b]

This is a freestyle thread on a positve tip. A place where creative minds can collaborate and be appreciated for their lyrical depth. A place where creative lyricism falls on appreciative ears. But first, let's lay down some rules.

[b][u][color="green"]RULES:[/color][/u][/b]
1. No plagiarism
2. No hatin/dissin on other Emcees. Only constructive critiques.
3. No battles. This isn't the battle thread.
4. No raps about guns and Gangsta style, it's played out.
5. Props are allowed, but no dickriding.
6. All textstyles should have atleast one bar (2 lines) flowing off the previous textstyle posted.
7. Minimum posts of 2 bars / Maximum 20 bars
8. If you want to comment, do it AFTER your final bar. We have to keep the cypher flowing.


[u][b][color="purple"]EXAMPLE:
TOPIC: Colors[/color][/b][/u]

[quote name='Emcee1']blah blah GREEN is the s.hit blah blah

TOPIC CHANGE:FRUITS[/quote]


[quote name='Emcee2']blah blah MaNgOs RoXXorS mY SoXxOrS blah blah.

CONTINUE[/quote]


[quote name='Emcee3']blah blah im scared of bananas blah blah

TOPIC CHANGE:FISH[/quote]


That's how this is gonna be going down, we'll see who has some talent.

[b]FIRST TOPIC:


[size=17]SCHOOL[/size][/b][/center]

Guess I should go first since I started the thread. I'll just throw a few bars to get things going.

First day of high school, I get my schedule and look confused
All alone, no friends and no crew, I walk the halls just gettin abused
I get shoved into class with a security guard strappin my shirt collar
First day and im already late, never gonna be a high school scholar
I cant find the cafateria so i find a tree and sit to eat my "cold lunch"
I cant afford a "hot lunch" so my mom packed this for me to munch
I see seniors walkin my way, i stand up to say high but i only get pushed away
"F.uck you too" i yell out, probably was the worst mistake of my life to date
As I see them turn around, I get up to run for the closest door
It's locked, just my luck I try another, as it open I yell "f.uck you" some more
I dont look back but I think I lost them, just then my face hits the floor
I close my eyes thinkin "this cant get any worse"
"It hurts like a b.itch" is what I tell the school nurse
She decides not to call my mom so I guess I got lucky
For the rest of the day every where I go I'm jumpy
The bell rings for the end of the day, I'm so thankful it's over
I reach into my back pack to unwrap my last russel stover
As I get home my mother screams "My baby, what happened to you?"
I laugh at her and smirk sayin' "high school mom, HIGH SCHOOL"

CONTINUE-

[Conor]

The gates stare at me in the face
I can never win this race
I walk away from the prision of my mind
That safe place i need to find
Its to late for me
Im dumb im stupid but im free
Don't have a soul on my side
Still ridiculed despite how hard that I have tried
I'll never get in them gates
I'll never get close to being called late
Its to late for me and my mind
I gusse im not as smart as mankind
And now I Don't have a soul on my side
Still ridiculed despite how hard that I have tried

- COntinue

[LMD]

A teacher said to me shut up and listen
I lost my temper so I started dissin,
I was not gonna be w=one of his ass kissin,
crew, got sent home so went fishin,
next day later,
forgot my calculator,
and I had maths and I had 2 bars of problems

bar1: I don't get tought propr
bar5: I dont like it




Continue

[Jos-B]

Call me a freshman, first year of school
Maybe one day, a fresh man, but now i'm a fool
Walking through the halls, looking for an education
Only finding ignorance, in this juvenile nation
Apathy and aloof are the words of the day
Trying to learn something, but they just push me away
A place of learning, that's what it's supposed to be
But high school is high school, and high school is free
At least for the kids, so they don't really care
But the parents pay taxes, still good parents are rare

CONTINUE

[fatman99999]

My name is large fries as said by sparx
but I bet he dropped out cause he got bad marks
the most education he got was about noah's ark
but it wasn't in bible school, it was in the rec center park
and I may not be the sharpest tool in the shed
but punks think I can't rap till they hear the beats in my head
the color is red
when I'm rapping that's what I'm seein
rap is my life, it's the cause of my being
so let's keep the thread going
this is just for fun
me and jin, public enemy number one

TOPIC CHANGE:
CARS

[LMD]

Cars are sexy

look ignore this post, i thought only jin could change topic though, but if thats the case

CHANGE TOPIC: FRIENDS

[Conor]

They say freinds are forever
They say you and freinds are as birds feathers
But the truth is they all go away
One fine summer day
Playing down on the field
Jimmy took that pill
He never stod a chance
He never had his one last dance
Freinds are forver
Friends are birds of a feather
But the truth lies in this tale
it was between timmy and dale
2 boys fishing in the lake
talking about girls and prom dates
Dale then stod up and said
I have made my bed
He jumped and was never seen again
Timmy cried for quite a spree
Never seemed to wash away the pain
But suddenly he woke up and was free
the birds feather had molted and it was summer again.

[fatman99999]

TOPIC CHANGE: DEATH

Okay, listen, I got something to say, so just listen........
He grew up livin the american dream
still young, just turned thirteen
but then one day, as he's walkin home
he hears a thump like a fallen microphone
then he turns around to see what just happened
sees a pool of blood
he'd been hit by a cap and then,
at the funeral something starts happenin
homies can't believe their eyes a light comes over the casket then
they hear a voice, it says, "Don't worry, I'm okay,
I'll be lookin down watching you"
and he still is to this day
and so, to anyone who's ever lost a friend,
just remember this : they'll stand beside you till the end
friends are forever, no matter what you hear
so don't take them for granted
and keep your memories clear
just know, they're lookin down with a smile
so just kick back, relax and look back up for a while.

[Jin]

Uh.. Conor, you're supposed to put "CONTINUE" or "TOPIC CHANGE" after your rhyme. And Fatman, that first rhyme was slightly dissin' towards Sparx, you can't do that dude, its a positive thread. And you can't change the subject before your rhyme, you can only do a rhyme of what the previous person put. SO! let's restart on a new subject, k peeps? ^^ So here, off the top:

NEW TOPIC: Falling asleep in class

Girl you fine, be mine, cause I want that ass
JIN, that's not appropriate english in class!
Damn, caught sleepin' again, what a disgrace
Classmates starin' at me cause of pen marks on my face
Psh, I don't care, I don't do work so my paper stack up
Then I use the shit as pillow, yeah, time to nap up
I was up all night, talkin' to girls online
Eyes so blurry, couldn't even see the time
No matter though, I'm chillin' in my school
The teach throws me a napkin, "Wipe the drool"
Damn b.itch, then all the peeps once again begin' to laugh
That's when I point at them wit a smirk, cause afta school, I'm whoopin' ass

CONTINUE!

[Jos-B]

Sittin in the back, the teacher just talks
To amuse myself, I make smarta$$ remarks
But still, this class is getting boring
I'm struggling just to keep myself from snoring
My head starts to nod, my eyes start to close
And in less than 10 seconds, I'm starting to doze
I hope there's no info I'm going to miss
But damn! sleeping's more exciting than this
So I lay my head down for a schooltime nap
Next thing I hear is tap tap tap
The teacher saw me catching some z's
But I'd rather get Z's than listen up and get C's

TOPIC CHANGE: THE MOVIES

[fatman99999]

[quote name='Jin' post='77819' date='Apr 2 2006, 02:32 AM']Uh.. Conor, you're supposed to put "CONTINUE" or "TOPIC CHANGE" after your rhyme. And Fatman, that first rhyme was slightly dissin' towards Sparx, you can't do that dude, its a positive thread. And you can't change the subject before your rhyme, you can only do a rhyme of what the previous person put. SO! let's restart on a new subject, k peeps? ^^ So here, off the top:

NEW TOPIC: Falling asleep in class

Girl you fine, be mine, cause I want that ass
JIN, that's not appropriate english in class!
Damn, caught sleepin' again, what a disgrace
Classmates starin' at me cause of pen marks on my face
Psh, I don't care, I don't do work so my paper stack up
Then I use the shit as pillow, yeah, time to nap up
I was up all night, talkin' to girls online
Eyes so blurry, couldn't even see the time
No matter though, I'm chillin' in my school
The teach throws me a napkin, "Wipe the drool"
Damn b.itch, then all the peeps once again begin' to laugh
That's when I point at them wit a smirk, cause afta school, I'm whoopin' ass

CONTINUE![/quote]

Oh, sorry man, gotta make it rhyme though, so nutt'n personal sparx.

anyway........

yo you seen the new flick about that one guy
in that one place with the other guy?
that was fly
so is said some movies are destined to flop
kinda like contemporary, ska and pop
the cinema excites some people, not me
there hasn't been one movie I've actually wanted to see
well, to be honest I wanted to die
whenever I saw a movie about another guy!

TOPIC CHANGE:
SNOT AND BOOGERS lol seriously

[Jos-B]

Uh-oh gonna lay it down Slick Rick storyteller style now!

Putting play on this girl sitting next to me
Hourglass body, apple bottom, and double D's
So we, sit, talk, sitting on the bus to school
But then. . .ahh. . .Ahh. . .AAH. . .ACHOOO!
Man, this bitch straight up sneezed on my shirt... and
If I wasn't a gentleman, this bitch would be hurtin'
I looked down, didn't want to touch it
The ish looked like Vaseline, glue, and mustard
The girl looks embarassed, she says "I'm sorry! What happened?"
I reply "It's ok, but bitch, get me a napkin."

CONTINUE

[LMD]

big green loogie, make me wanna booogie

CHANGE TOPIC: IS THIS THE WAY TO AMIRRILO?

[fatman99999]

[quote name=''The Underdog' Mikey D' post='80464' date='Apr 3 2006, 01:13 PM']big green loogie, make me wanna booogie

CHANGE TOPIC: IS THIS THE WAY TO AMIRRILO?[/quote]


STOP SPAMMING! THIS IS NOT A JOKE! POST A RAP OR GET OUT! TOPIC CHANGE NULLIFIED.

mmmmmmmmmmfrgh.......I don't want to have to continue this but ok

just sitting on the couch watching tv with my girl
but then my nose starts to tingle and my vision starts to twirl
I try to hold it in but it's just too strong
she knew what was happening all along
she moved out of the way just when.....ACHOO!
the couch is yellow, brown and green and it sticks like glue,
and this time I'm not gon say continue

TOPIC CHANGE:
NOSE HAIR

[Jin]

Walkin down the street, I peep a girl with a nice booty
With hair flowin like a Hollywood chick from a movie
Ima do me, pick up my pace, Im givin chase
I tap her waist, she turns and looks at me revealin her face
"GOD DAMN!", shes a beast, my heart skips a beat
Nose hair sticking out like road kill on the side of the street
She asks, "Do I know you?" with a giggle and a snort
Shes got a mustache and a wart, my plan is to abort
Im hypnotized by her cocked eyes, my disgust aint disguised
So I turn around and flee, feelin shook and terrorized
Her unibrow and nose hair, I couldnt block out my thoughts
Stopped after six blocks, no longer feeling distrought
Felt like a little punk for runnin, should have acted bigger yo
But a girl like that could only be loved by Deuce Bigalow

TOPIC CHANGE: Your Favorite Recent SCA Emcee

[Lmao Fatman, what's up with nose raps? XD]

[Conor]

I knew from day one that it was a friendship to be-hold
He posted kiddy and cute, hell i thought he was about 4
But it turns out he was big and strong
It just goes to prove how you can be wrong
His name never mattered as it sometimes changed
This kid helped me through some pain
His jokes had me rolling around
But then he turned, hell he hit the ground
There was no hope,
he had turned into a joke
The monster inside had taken control
There was no time for lol
This is the end of my tale
For our freindship set sail


Contine (P.S Stop spamming bitches, JIN RULES )

[Jos-B]

Aight, I was checkin the battle thread today
And suddenly some dude comes up, calls me gay

Starts flaming about me and fatman 99999
When I ain't done nothing to him, I kept it benign

So he lays down some bars, and comes out at me
He's seems like he's angry, as far as I can see

So I type up a response, to defend my honor
Cuz keeping silent is as good as bein' a goner

Turns out, dude ain't as bad as I thought he was
I made uninformed judgements, just becuz

When you meet a new person, you automatically judge
And if you're closed-minded, that judge won't budge

But I know better than to neglect to correct
my judgement of BlKhWk, he's earned my respect

CHANGE TOPIC: DINNER (why not?)

[Jin]

Get home from work, lights off like nobody's there
check the fridge and cabinets already knowin it's bare
saw some wasted food on the ground and swept it up with a broom
that's when I heard a little noise comin from inside my room
my woman's on the bed, legs spread, lookin straight at my eyes
smiled reale softly then asked if i liked my surprise
but i said" you ate all the food but you complain you ain't thinner"
She walked out the door and I yell "God damn, there goes my dinner!"

TOPIC CHANGE: Seein' a monkey do a drive by in a Buick.

What? Be creative!

[Jos-B]

Walking down the street, much to my surprise
See a strange sight from the corner of my eyes

There's an ape drivin' a LeSabre, was I goin' cuckoo?
The simian screams out the window, "Bettah check yo self, foo'!"

I'm thinking "what the f*ck's going on, my eyeballs must be lying."
Just when I thought this foolishness was over, chimp pulls out a Tec-9

Then I see the guy the chimp's yelling at, strollin' down the avenue
So I scream to dude, "RUN! N*gga Magilla Gorilla's after you!"

Then I notice man's wearing Crip colors, blue shirt and bandana
So the monkey's a Blood? Man, this sh*t is bananas.

TOPIC CHANGE: BANANAS! B-A-N-A-N-A-S!