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Random rap I made, criticism greatly appreciated
 

So let me clarify,

This is the the tale of the tape not a tale of a cape 

But instead I'm rocking bape 

But I'm forsure better than the rest 

Even better than the best

Better than Kanye West

Always blessed but always never stressed

Zip up the vest and now I'm ready 

On the conquest which you can call unsteady 

But now lemme get this off my chest

There's no coming back from here 

No fire escape

Even a few more seconds in

Still rocking bape without a fire escape

When I'm done I'll crush you like an orange 

Swing you like a door hinge

Your not official your just

On the fringe

Yet I still ride this track, this an attack 

Like kakarot on that flying nimbus

I've got that good vibe like a getting a gift on Christmas

The names Armani 

You can't really call my brawny 

Since even 12 years in I'm still a little bit scrawny

Even though i can still pack a punch 

Just like your mommy packed your lunch 

Hero like Kurt no I'm not talking grunge 

Tallinn bout the Olympic Gold Medalist,

the Cryptic Bold Specialist

Through my skillset is still under development 

When ever I start writing these rhymes 

I'm in my natural element

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LOL no prob. Reminded me of a character on my caw show called Diss Track Attorney.

 

My character The Rudeness was sporting his t-shirt with red writing and I made Diss Track Attorney say "plain white shirt rockin' red text...cheap ass delivery just like FedEx"

 

 

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On 6/3/2020 at 9:11 AM, cmhunter7g2 said:

LOL no prob. Reminded me of a character on my caw show called Diss Track Attorney.

 

My character The Rudeness was sporting his t-shirt with red writing and I made Diss Track Attorney say "plain white shirt rockin' red text...cheap ass delivery just like FedEx"

 

 

Those are some bars right there 😂
 

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