TheBLACKESTManOnEarth Posted June 1, 2020 Report Share Posted June 1, 2020 Random rap I made, criticism greatly appreciated So let me clarify, This is the the tale of the tape not a tale of a cape But instead I'm rocking bape But I'm forsure better than the rest Even better than the best Better than Kanye West Always blessed but always never stressed Zip up the vest and now I'm ready On the conquest which you can call unsteady But now lemme get this off my chest There's no coming back from here No fire escape Even a few more seconds in Still rocking bape without a fire escape When I'm done I'll crush you like an orange Swing you like a door hinge Your not official your just On the fringe Yet I still ride this track, this an attack Like kakarot on that flying nimbus I've got that good vibe like a getting a gift on Christmas The names Armani You can't really call my brawny Since even 12 years in I'm still a little bit scrawny Even though i can still pack a punch Just like your mommy packed your lunch Hero like Kurt no I'm not talking grunge Tallinn bout the Olympic Gold Medalist, the Cryptic Bold Specialist Through my skillset is still under development When ever I start writing these rhymes I'm in my natural element Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmhunter7g2 Posted June 2, 2020 Report Share Posted June 2, 2020 Kurt Cobain reference was my fave bit!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBLACKESTManOnEarth Posted June 3, 2020 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2020 9 hours ago, cmhunter7g2 said: Kurt Cobain reference was my fave bit!! Thanks dude lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmhunter7g2 Posted June 3, 2020 Report Share Posted June 3, 2020 LOL no prob. Reminded me of a character on my caw show called Diss Track Attorney. My character The Rudeness was sporting his t-shirt with red writing and I made Diss Track Attorney say "plain white shirt rockin' red text...cheap ass delivery just like FedEx" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheBLACKESTManOnEarth Posted June 4, 2020 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2020 On 6/3/2020 at 9:11 AM, cmhunter7g2 said: LOL no prob. Reminded me of a character on my caw show called Diss Track Attorney. My character The Rudeness was sporting his t-shirt with red writing and I made Diss Track Attorney say "plain white shirt rockin' red text...cheap ass delivery just like FedEx" Those are some bars right there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmhunter7g2 Posted June 5, 2020 Report Share Posted June 5, 2020 14 hours ago, TheBLACKESTManOnEarth said: Those are some bars right there Thanks LOL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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