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Big E Langston Request


Dolph.Perfection

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Nice job with Big E, but a few suggestions on making the CAW perfect:

 

Firstly, the hair does not work and is somewhat distracting. I know there are a limited about of hairstyles, but there has to be one that is better than the mid 90's Taz hairdo.

 

Secondly, Big E. has more chin than what you have given him. Take a look at this pic for reference on the chin:

 

http://http://images.wikia.com/prowrestling/images/b/b3/Big_E.jpg

 

http://http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-hiooYFre_cA/UKTn8e0-HnI/AAAAAAAAT_U/b4qwFNR8-EU/s640/11-15-2012+8-02-33+AM.jpg

 

Thirdly, great choice for the mouth and lips. I would just suggest that the lips look a little less red in color because as it stands he looks as if he has lipstick on.

 

Fourthly, I just wanted to point out that your eyes, eyebrows, ears, and nose are insanely spot on. Great job with those.

 

Fifthly, the head looks a bit off. Big E.'s head is a subtle egg shape and yours looks too exaggerated on top. However, please note that I may be making this comment because of the fact that there is little to no chin on the CAW the way you have it. With the addition of a chin, this CAW may really end up looking spot on and render this observation irreverent. But if you add a chin and it still appears off then you will have to adjust the upper part of his head to make the egg shape more subtle.

 

Sixthly, my big issue with the caw is the mustache. It looks like you used shapes as opposed to actual facial hair. What I would recommend doing is putting facial hair on him and then using some of the shapes from the tattoos-design section to cover up the excess. I think that would end up looking a lot more like his actual facial hair.

 

Seventhly, I have a few issues with the outfit. While I think that the symbol is perfect, the white does not flatter him. I would change the white outfit to his red outfit. Once more it is much too tight. I know there is another singlet type outfit that does not hug his body the way this one does.

 

Eighthly, I think his mid section needs to be a bit wider than you currently have it and his hands need to be in better proportion with the rest of his body. Please take a look at this picture of a guy that made a Big E. CAW who did it so well that it is scary:

 

http://http://smacknetwork.com/images/cawsearch/wwe13/397_2.jpg

 

Also somewhere in the tattoos section there is a similar design to the Lion of Judah that he has on the red outfit. If you put all these together I think you could probably get a better CAW than the guy who created the one above.

 

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Thanks for the feedback, yeah it does need some work. The hair bugged me too, I tried to give him normal hair then a headband to cover the sides but it looked bad. Maybe with hair hacks you could get better hair. I did use shapes for the moustache because the regular ones are all too long and don't look like big E's. I used these pics as reference for the lips and chin, so maybe that's why they look a bit off:

 

http://s.mcstatic.com/thumb/9433119/24744392/4/flash_player/0/1/wwe_nxt_big_e_langston_vs_camacho_season_6.jpg?v=6

http://thegazette.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/06/RAW_02112013ej_0182b.jpg

 

I will also try to give him his regular attire, if i can recreate the lion symbol, and see if it looks better.

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