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wweuniverse4787

Magnus - British Invasion Attire!

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I feel this is easily my best CAW yet but I'm not a huge fan of the hair, I am also going to fix up the pants and get the proper british flag logo and not the WWE one. If you have any tips on what hair to use can you please post them below? :)

 

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All criticism is welcome but please don't just say something like "Bad" or "Not good" tell me where I'm going wrong please so I can improve it.

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Just wait... won't you finish your older caws?

Anyway, finally some face detailing, but I don't like the face

Here's one face ref for you...

 

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And about the attire, I suggest you to paint tool the logos or ask someone to texture it.

Refs for the logos:

 

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That was actually the reference photos I was working off plus some off TNA. Also I tend to start one CAW get it part way done then start another and finish the other one up later ...I know kinda silly but otherwise I'll get bored.

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Now here are my tips:

 

- Default eyebrows again? Change it and decrease the angle a little

- Decrease his mouth's angle, I think about -5 to -10 is good

- Try to change the lipstick

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A few suggestions.

  • Decrease the cranium width a bit, it looks too exaggerated at the moment in my opinion.
  • Bring down the eyebrow height a little and adjust the angle.
  • Darken facial hair.
  • Try the next skin tone if that's the Sheamus'ish skin.
  • For that specific attire it looks like you've got the best hair, but for more recent attires I'd go for 10.
  • Decrease the width of the nose.

?Hope this helps. :cool:

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Nose, mouth, and jaw are off.. his nose is defined not fat and flat.. thin out the bridge.. change thin mouth size, square off the jaw :cool: Don't see much Mag'daddy in this TBH.

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Thanks guys, going to take all of this in and work on it tomorrow as soon as I get home from work and hopefully work on it for a few hours. I'm also going to try do a bit more to my other caws that I have started but am yet to finish fully like Cesaro, Roode and Bully Ray

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