Hurrikane1989 Posted September 21, 2012 Report Share Posted September 21, 2012 This is a jeff hardy caw I done up yesterday. Pt's are Credited to Archer, Acid, Dominus, and MrB. The morphing and body figs are from Archer's hardy. Lip detailing inspired by The D. Sorry for the quality of the pics. Caw is Uploaded on Live, search tag is Hurrikane1989. Open to tweaks and suggestions, will re-upload if changes need to be made. V2 is also uploaded. face update 9/29 Face update 9/25 [/url] Face update 9/23 [/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paulie Walnuts Posted September 21, 2012 Report Share Posted September 21, 2012 For starters he looks African American. That face just isn't great. If you think you've "worked" on that, I'd go back, and try to figure out what exactlt went work. And the tattoo's have to be blended better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clique Posted September 21, 2012 Report Share Posted September 21, 2012 You need to fix the body morph brother, it looks really bad right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hurrikane1989 Posted September 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2012 thanks for the suggestions, the pics are making the body morph look really bad, took them with my phone. I used the african american face template, thought I could get the nose to look better that way. Im gonna go back and look at some refs and and make some adjustments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JDsorento Posted September 21, 2012 Report Share Posted September 21, 2012 The firstguy who commented waskinda harsh. Its notbad like he made it out to be. But anyway, the nose to me looks off and the lips look too long and wide and the head seems to be little big but it might just be the pictures. Other than that I really dont see much wrong with it. Good so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last Ride 123 Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 Decrease lip design in length, increase upper jaw line, angle his eyes more, just for starters. Look at a lot of face references. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zD A K I N Gz Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 Holy crap this looks great! The second paint looks alittle pixelated you should try decreasing the size and working with the designs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hurrikane1989 Posted September 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 new update on the face, took your guys suggestions and I like the results. Im thinking about changing the black and white paint as Im having a hard time doing much with it. You guys got any good suggestions on paints for black long sleeve attire? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WFMashUpz Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 I think you should decrease the abdomen height and change the skin texture.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oldsie Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 The skin texture is fine 11 I am guessing. If you're using 11 you need to cover the Nose with designs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last Ride 123 Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 also widen his jaw a tad and maybe the jaw outline also, if youre in the negatives i wouldnt go much lower than -5 and no more than + 5 for that. also is that my eyebrow PT? if so youve applied them wrong. you need to make them less thick and a tad longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Pete Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 This looks sweet, nice bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hurrikane1989 Posted September 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 @ diminish I will work on tweaking the jaw, and yes that is your eyebrow pt, I will adjust that also. Thanks bro @ nwoldschool , yes, I'm using face skin 11. Ill try and work with some designs on the nose and see what I can do. @ big Pete , thanks bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last Ride 123 Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 Also you should lighten the tiger design you used for his mustache. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGen Posted September 23, 2012 Report Share Posted September 23, 2012 The detailing above the lip is very obvious I suggest lightening that up a lot and for the tattoos shading on them would help and if you can find a way to fading the bright colors of the tattoo it would make it look a lot better Also what attiers do you plan on using? I have never seen anyone do his attier from his last match in wwe I think it would be cool to see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hurrikane1989 Posted September 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2012 @ igenerator , I might look into that attire, may end up doing 2 slots. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last Ride 123 Posted September 25, 2012 Report Share Posted September 25, 2012 Lighten the lip design more, remove the design on his forehead or blend it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hurrikane1989 Posted September 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2012 @ dominus, thanks, should have another update tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paulie Walnuts Posted September 25, 2012 Report Share Posted September 25, 2012 Face update looks a lot better, from what I can tell I'd decrease the width of the cranium and lower the height on the forehead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KomicJ Posted September 25, 2012 Report Share Posted September 25, 2012 That's actually quite good in my opinion. The third picture especially for me, which makes me think there might be something bothering me about his forehead, maybe. Don't know what it is though. Will keep an eye on this for sure... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last Ride 123 Posted September 28, 2012 Report Share Posted September 28, 2012 The 9/23 update looks better than the 9/25 update imo. So for your current version....DECREASE cranium width, INCREASE jaw width, ANGLE his eyes more, maybe add some make up around his eyes..not jet black more of a faded black...i always go skin color then darker...so i think my XY is something like 13,134...i cant remember the shade but it will help with the darkness that Jeff has around his eyes... DECREASE the width of the design you used for his lips as its running into the crease of his mouth almost on his cheek..it looks like maybe 1 or 2 clicks less wide...also his top lip is thicker than his bottom lip, so you want to try to make his top lip slightly thicker than the bottom lip..NOT a lot thicker, just slightly...INCREASE his upper jaw line...thinks thats all ive got for you man. This is looking decent, just take my(and everyone elses) suggestions and youll stay on the right track:) good job so far, dont give up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hurrikane1989 Posted September 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2012 @dominus, thanks bro, I think Im gonna do one more update after tonights. Gonna wait till Im satisfied with it completely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WFMashUpz Posted September 29, 2012 Report Share Posted September 29, 2012 I'm feeling it bro, good job on the updates... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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