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Jeff Hardy by Hurrikane1989 Face Update 9/29

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#1 Hurrikane1989

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 02:40 AM

This is a jeff hardy caw I done up yesterday. Pt's are Credited to Archer, Acid, Dominus, and MrB. The morphing and body figs are from Archer's hardy. Lip detailing inspired by The D. Sorry for the quality of the pics. Caw is Uploaded on Live, search tag is Hurrikane1989. Open to tweaks and suggestions, will re-upload if changes need to be made. V2 is also uploaded.






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Edited by Hurrikane1989, 29 September 2012 - 02:14 PM.


#2 Paulie Walnuts

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 03:55 AM

For starters he looks African American. That face just isn't great. If you think you've "worked" on that, I'd go back, and try to figure out what exactlt went work. And the tattoo's have to be blended better.

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 03:58 AM

You need to fix the body morph brother, it looks really bad right now

#4 Hurrikane1989

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 04:16 AM

thanks for the suggestions, the pics are making the body morph look really bad, took them with my phone. I used the african american face template, thought I could get the nose to look better that way. Im gonna go back and look at some refs and and make some adjustments.

#5 JDsorento

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 11:18 PM

The firstguy who commented waskinda harsh. Its notbad like he made it out to be. But anyway, the nose to me looks off and the lips look too long and wide and the head seems to be little big but it might just be the pictures. Other than that I really dont see much wrong with it. Good so far.

#6 Last Ride 123

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Posted 22 September 2012 - 01:18 AM

Decrease lip design in length, increase upper jaw line, angle his eyes more, just for starters. Look at a lot of face references.

Edited by Dominus, 22 September 2012 - 01:19 AM.


#7 zD A K I N Gz

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Posted 22 September 2012 - 01:39 AM

Holy crap this looks great! The second paint looks alittle pixelated you should try decreasing the size and working with the designs

Edited by zD A K I N Gz, 22 September 2012 - 01:42 AM.


#8 Hurrikane1989

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Posted 22 September 2012 - 03:05 AM

new update on the face, took your guys suggestions and I like the results. Im thinking about changing the black and white paint as Im having a hard time doing much with it. You guys got any good suggestions on paints for black long sleeve attire?

Edited by Hurrikane1989, 22 September 2012 - 03:06 AM.


#9 WFMashUpz

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Posted 22 September 2012 - 03:33 AM

I think you should decrease the abdomen height and change the skin texture..

Edited by WFMashUpz, 22 September 2012 - 03:34 AM.


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Posted 22 September 2012 - 03:02 PM

The skin texture is fine 11 I am guessing. If you're using 11 you need to cover the Nose with designs.

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Posted 22 September 2012 - 03:18 PM

also widen his jaw a tad and maybe the jaw outline also, if youre in the negatives i wouldnt go much lower than -5 and no more than + 5 for that. also is that my eyebrow PT? if so youve applied them wrong. you need to make them less thick and a tad longer.

Edited by Dominus, 22 September 2012 - 03:20 PM.


#12 Big Pete

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Posted 22 September 2012 - 03:27 PM

This looks sweet, nice bro :cool:

#13 Hurrikane1989

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Posted 22 September 2012 - 05:04 PM

@ diminish I will work on tweaking the jaw, and yes that is your eyebrow pt, I will adjust that also. Thanks bro

@ nwoldschool , yes, I'm using face skin 11. Ill try and work with some designs on the nose and see what I can do.

@ big Pete , thanks bro.

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Posted 22 September 2012 - 11:43 PM

Also you should lighten the tiger design you used for his mustache.

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Posted 23 September 2012 - 01:13 AM

The detailing above the lip is very obvious I suggest lightening that up a lot and for the tattoos shading on them would help and if you can find a way to fading the bright colors of the tattoo it would make it look a lot better



Also what attiers do you plan on using? I have never seen anyone do his attier from his last match in wwe I think it would be cool to see

Edited by iGenerator, 23 September 2012 - 01:24 AM.


#16 Hurrikane1989

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Posted 23 September 2012 - 01:33 AM

@ igenerator , I might look into that attire, may end up doing 2 slots.

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Posted 25 September 2012 - 02:04 PM

Lighten the lip design more, remove the design on his forehead or blend it better.

#18 Hurrikane1989

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Posted 25 September 2012 - 02:15 PM

@ dominus, thanks, should have another update tonight.

#19 Paulie Walnuts

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Posted 25 September 2012 - 05:50 PM

Face update looks a lot better, from what I can tell I'd decrease the width of the cranium and lower the height on the forehead.

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Posted 25 September 2012 - 06:10 PM

That's actually quite good in my opinion. The third picture especially for me, which makes me think there might be something bothering me about his forehead, maybe. Don't know what it is though. Will keep an eye on this for sure... :)





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