Miztah Raza Posted September 15, 2012 Report Share Posted September 15, 2012 Here I present to you my first CAW! It is in a very early state at the moment as I've only started some 3 hours ago. The face is based on Shock800's Punk, but that's about it, the tatt's are mine (I got 'em myself), The body formula is tweaked from shock's punk, the logos, etc are mine. Here are the pics: Original: MITB 2011: Face: In-game: Whatever is in a red box does not show up in-game, it's just my crappy cap-card. The face is not as wrinkly as shown and the skin tone is darker than pictured. The PT's have been blended well, and do not stick out like that. I would love some feedback on this! I am planning on doing the following attires: WWE'12 attire MITB 2011 attire Macho man tribute attire and, Bret Hart tribute attire. The Bret Hart tribute attire is an "iffy" so if I decide to give up on it I need some suggestions on what to do for the 4th attire so please suggest! Thanks for reading, I appreciate it and please do not mind the crappy pics, it's all I can do. Thanks! EDIT LOG: EDIT 9/16/12: added new pics, preview of MITB 2011 attire, face re-done) OLD: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
genesismuha@aol.com Posted September 15, 2012 Report Share Posted September 15, 2012 im really liking this except his eyes look to sad, and his jaw looks to big ( or thick). but beside that this is amazing man good work. any word on the upload? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Last Ride 123 Posted September 15, 2012 Report Share Posted September 15, 2012 Wow. Impressive for your first caw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miztah Raza Posted September 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2012 Wow. Impressive for your first caw. Thanks, PT does wonders! LOL im really liking this except his eyes look to sad, and his jaw looks to big ( or thick). but beside that this is amazing man good work. any word on the upload? Yep, I thought the same thing about the eyes, as stated, this is an early stage so those will be fixed when it is uploaded. Which brings me to when it'll be UL'd, as soon as it's done, I'll post a pack on mediafire(which includes Titantron, MP3 and CAS File). Is this allowed? If not I will also upload it to xbox live if a friend can do me a favour and UL it for me(Don't have live :/) As for the jaw, I will look into it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3lectricity Posted September 15, 2012 Report Share Posted September 15, 2012 I really don't see much Punk in the face at all. I suggest rearranging the texture because it's a bit out of place, I think you have it too stretched in the width and you can use some more height. As you can see the Eyebrows are way too low, and if you look at the Eye sockets of the texture you can easily see that it's too stretched. Blend the color of the trunks to match the PT you have applied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miztah Raza Posted September 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2012 I really don't see much Punk in the face at all. I suggest rearranging the texture because it's a bit out of place, I think you have it too stretched in the width and you can use some more height. As you can see the Eyebrows are way too low, and if you look at the Eye sockets of the texture you can easily see that it's too stretched. Blend the color of the trunks to match the PT you have applied. I see what you mean, I will be using new face textures anyway, split up the face into quarters instead of halves, just noticed the eyebrows, but the new texture should fix it. As mentioned in OP, it's my cap card that makes the PT's look like crap. they are blended with the trunks prefectly(well, almost). Thanks for the feedback and I will go through the face again tomorrow morning(It's late here). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ppczTNA50 Posted September 15, 2012 Report Share Posted September 15, 2012 looks amazing bro! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Codes. Posted September 15, 2012 Report Share Posted September 15, 2012 Really bad texture job. I suggest working on the textures a little more before throwing the on a caw. Also, just because you have a texture doesn't mean you don't have to do detail work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AjSim Posted September 15, 2012 Report Share Posted September 15, 2012 I think for a first time caw and just 3 hours work it's a really good start...tattoos look great, face and texture placement needs some additional work but you already know that yourself. Good to see someone with the ways and means having a go though as for the pic issue i can completely understand your annoyance as most pictures either don't do the caw justice or completely flatter to deceive...very few show a completely accurate representation of what is shown on your own screen so don't fret too much. Although i have no desire to download a punk caw i look forward to seeing how you get on and what you come up with in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DH3™ Posted September 15, 2012 Report Share Posted September 15, 2012 I think for a first time caw and just 3 hours work it's a really good start...tattoos look great, face and texture placement needs some additional work but you already know that yourself. Good to see someone with the ways and means having a go though as for the pic issue i can completely understand your annoyance as most pictures either don't do the caw justice or completely flatter to deceive...very few show a completely accurate representation of what is shown on your own screen so don't fret too much. Although i have no desire to download a punk caw i look forward to seeing how you get on and what you come up with in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ravenos Posted September 15, 2012 Report Share Posted September 15, 2012 Looking solid, particularly for a first attempt. I was thinking of trying to update one of the many Punks out there. The problem I keep having is choosing my 10 pts. Looks like you made good choices. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miztah Raza Posted September 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 Really bad texture job. I suggest working on the textures a little more before throwing the on a caw. Also, just because you have a texture doesn't mean you don't have to do detail work. As I've mentioned before, this is at an early state and I will be reworking the textures. Yes, I did do SOME detail work, I'm not very good at morphing, etc. I didn't just slap the texture onto a template and call it a day, I followed a formula, while tweaking it to my liking along the way. I think for a first time caw and just 3 hours work it's a really good start...tattoos look great, face and texture placement needs some additional work but you already know that yourself. Good to see someone with the ways and means having a go though as for the pic issue i can completely understand your annoyance as most pictures either don't do the caw justice or completely flatter to deceive...very few show a completely accurate representation of what is shown on your own screen so don't fret too much. Although i have no desire to download a punk caw i look forward to seeing how you get on and what you come up with in the future. Thanks! One day I was just like, "I'm going to make a kickass caw!", 3 hours later I was posting a thread on CAWS.WS! Thanks for the tattoo comment! Yea I have my "ways" lawl. If someone was to sit right beside me and look at my tv, they would know that the pics don't do the CAW any justice. Once I'm finished, if you have extra caw slots, just give it a go in-game and then delete it if you like I too am looking forward to what I do in the future, but they will probably be modified versions of other peoples CAWS. Looking solid, particularly for a first attempt. I was thinking of trying to update one of the many Punks out there. The problem I keep having is choosing my 10 pts. Looks like you made good choices. Guess I just beat ya there buddy LOL. Thanks for the kind comments, and I haven't made very good choices, I can't put on the kickpads, without getting rid of some textures, therefore, I'll have to make the face textures again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FCBarcelona Posted September 16, 2012 Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 Great start! I'd suggest to increase the shine just a bit and to raise the eyebrows. offtopic: Does your Xbox need to be "altered" in order to insert paint tool files? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miztah Raza Posted September 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 Great start! I'd suggest to increase the shine just a bit and to raise the eyebrows. offtopic: Does your Xbox need to be "altered" in order to insert paint tool files? Will look into the shine! Have used new textures on this bad boy, so lets see what happens! Offtopic: Not sure what you are meaning by that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FCBarcelona Posted September 16, 2012 Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 Great start! I'd suggest to increase the shine just a bit and to raise the eyebrows. offtopic: Does your Xbox need to be "altered" in order to insert paint tool files? Will look into the shine! Have used new textures on this bad boy, so lets see what happens! Offtopic: Not sure what you are meaning by that. What I meant was- Does one's xbox need to be modded/hacked to be able to get paint tools from mediafire files. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miztah Raza Posted September 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 Added new pics, preview of MITB 2011 attire, face re-done. Is the face ok now? Is it better than before? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kαятik Posted September 16, 2012 Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 Better than before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miztah Raza Posted September 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 Face updated again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DH3™ Posted September 16, 2012 Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 now it looks awesome ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FCBarcelona Posted September 16, 2012 Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 I think you should use the kofi Kingston kickpads; the ones you used just look awkward. I don't know what's up on the sides of his face but hopefully you can get fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WFMashUpz Posted September 16, 2012 Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 You should use the Kickpads... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miztah Raza Posted September 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2012 You should use the Kickpads... OK Will do those very soon! I have to study so after I'm done with that, I'll make some changes and post pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqfitz Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 Probably the best CM Punk Face i've seen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clique Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 Probably the best CM Punk Face i've seen http://caws.ws/forum/topic/434689-91712-update-best-in-the-world-randy-orton-finished-wade-barrett-feed-me-more-austin-aries-and-rvd-uploaded/ There ya go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kush™ Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 Texture looks too stretched and what happened to the brows? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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