diante616 Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 Melina Carlito Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diante616 Posted December 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 Shad Bobby lashley Kurt angle updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jpraelster93 Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 just a suggestion try to focus on one caw at a time dont make so many at once Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrSmileySmile Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 I agree. These look like good bases though. Pull up some references to work alongside with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheGoldenKhan06 Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 They all need work looks like you rushed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike aka tank Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Melina look the best. Bobby's head look a lil to thin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diante616 Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Keep the feedback coming and my cam isnt that good so some of these arent as bad as you think and I do work on one at a time I been making caws for like a month now im new to this so feel free to give advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrSmileySmile Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Go slower, use more refs, and post refs next to your caws. If your CAW looks like X when posted next to a picture of X, that's a damn good CAW. The best CAW makers here will continually revise their Caws, asking for advice from the community, and work win a ton or references. One or the RVDs here has a collage of refs beside CAW images. I suck with Caws myself, but I've seen the greats here working together and providing and accepting criticisms for years. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diante616 Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Yeah thats how it should be unfortunately you got some people who just wanna be ignorant with that being said im working on lashley first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrSmileySmile Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_b_WGMZ_QG08/TLFo7UiKqtI/AAAAAAAAACM/gDGhP4DVepo/s1600/Bobby-Lashley.jpg http://celebritywonder.ugo.com/picture/Bobby_Lashley/BobbyLashley_Spellman_13292657.jpg http://www.wrestlingvalley.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/Bobby_Lashley23.jpg http://prommanow.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/03/bobby_lashleysuit.jpg http://www.wwe.com/f/article/image/2008/02/5667286.jpg http://www.blogcdn.com/www.mmafighting.com/media/2009/10/bobbylassj.jpg http://themmakingdom.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/bobby-lashley_photo2boxart_160w.jpg http://a.espncdn.com/photo/2010/0406/mma_i_lashley01_576.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diante616 Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Ok I tweaked lashley hows this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinnerman Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Everything is too exaggerated on them all. Try to go for neutral expressions on their faces. Lashley looks like he's busting a shit out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack The Ripper Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Slow down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kush™ Posted January 1, 2012 Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 How much time were spent on this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diante616 Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Well I just started lashley im tryna get the morph right and I see what you mean about the expression.. As for melina im comin back to that later and shad I made because some dude asked me to help make him.. Any more suggestions for lashley besides expression? The man with the plan the brian kendrick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beast And The Harlot Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 No offence but a lot of these are bad. They don't look like their counter part, you need to find neutral facial pics, since the game creates the emotions. I believe in the SvR 11 CAW forums there is a topic about picture reference, which lists places to get many good pics. You cannot create a CAW just by looking at one picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diante616 Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 I get what your saying so all my caws face should be neutral is that correct? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beast And The Harlot Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 I get what your saying so all my caws dace should be neutral is that correct? Yes and use a wide variety of pictures not just one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diante616 Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Okay I got you thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jpraelster93 Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 why did you start kendrick and not make lashley perfect first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3kings Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 They all need work looks like you rushed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrSmileySmile Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Part of what is bothering people is probably just that you ask for help but then move onto another CAW so quickly. If its for your own enjoyment there is nothing wrong with that. The Keiji Mutoh I used in 2010 was a horrible Asian Stone Cold because I couldn't find any caws of him...but I would never have posted that here. Try just working on what you have thus far instead of moving on to others. Try a few different things on Lashley or if you prefer work on nailing Spanky. Perhaps make a new topic for Lashley/Spanky after you've spent some time on him and then ask for advice and post revisions. That said, nice constructive criticism 3kings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diante616 Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 I was waiting for feedback I asked if yall had any suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrSmileySmile Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Lashleys eyes are set tooclose together and his cheeks look drawn in. Edit the post with Spanky and post a ref of him rather than a render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diante616 Posted January 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Im gonna put lashley on the backburner for now I think imma continue with spanky that being said.i followed harlots advice and I gotta say he is so right about many reference pics and expressions thanks to him i think I nailed shad *i know his jaw looks small buts thats the cam that makes it look that way* Also I need feedback on spanky gonna focus on him now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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