BigmanSDMF86 Posted October 10, 2011 Report Share Posted October 10, 2011 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qu7cw34EQ1s Hey everyone this is my Character on SVR 2011 i was just playing around please let me know what you think. I apologize about the video IDK how to record game play so i used my digital camera. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigmanSDMF86 Posted October 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2011 C'mon Feedback?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroTechnyks Posted October 10, 2011 Report Share Posted October 10, 2011 It's very generic and I don't have much else to go on to give any other comments. As far as I can tell, he has no name, no actual gimmick. If there was some kind of bio to go with it, I'd be able to provide more insight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigmanSDMF86 Posted October 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2011 It's very generic and I don't have much else to go on to give any other comments. As far as I can tell, he has no name, no actual gimmick. If there was some kind of bio to go with it, I'd be able to provide more insight. I am totally a NEWBIE at this stuff so what do u mean Gimmick Bio??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroTechnyks Posted October 10, 2011 Report Share Posted October 10, 2011 It's very generic and I don't have much else to go on to give any other comments. As far as I can tell, he has no name, no actual gimmick. If there was some kind of bio to go with it, I'd be able to provide more insight. I am totally a NEWBIE at this stuff so what do u mean Gimmick Bio??? A gimmick is the wrestler's character. For example: John Cena is like Superman, CM Punk is 'the Best in the World', Kane is a monster, Randy Orton is the Viper, etc. Basically, I could give more criticism when I get a better idea of who he is. As it is right now, he looks like a brawler or a bully, but I don't know for sure. His entrance is rather random between fires and slow walking and Orton's old arm posing, so that isn't helping me at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigmanSDMF86 Posted October 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2011 Yeah I need to tweak him I'm thinking about redoing it from scratch, and making a Biker Gimmick out of him with tattoo's all over his arms, and such would that help with a gimmick?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroTechnyks Posted October 11, 2011 Report Share Posted October 11, 2011 That's a good starting point. Don't forget to decide whether he's a good-guy or bad-guy and that will help a little in choosing his move set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oz70NYC Posted October 11, 2011 Report Share Posted October 11, 2011 Pyro pretty much nailed everything I was going to say in his initial post. As one of the forbearer of the PS3 Original CAW community here, I'm always interested in seeing newcomers cultivated and helped out to make more unique and dynamic originals. What you're guy has despite being "basic" is a solid platform...he's huge. Initially from your choice of attire for him, I got the biker/hired gun vibe from him. You already made the decision to add more ink to him, which is what I would do myself with such a character. The most important part of creating an original CAW is making sure that the character's persona pretty much pours out of every ounce of it. The morphing, the attires, the entrance, the move-set...everything. As Pyro said, gimmick is everything for an original CAW...because aside from the gimmick and look, there's not much to go by since it's original. It's gotta be visually appealing, because the visual is all you have to start with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TiagoVWA Posted October 31, 2011 Report Share Posted October 31, 2011 The video has been removed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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