ttttttttttt Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 [IMG]http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af50/Astro_022/ronson.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af50/Astro_022/woo.png[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kreay fufu Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 I like the first. The displacement effect looks good, although it just seems a little bland. I really dislike the second. It's too small for a start and the textures just don't seem to work properly for me. It seems slapped together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tsel Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 I like the first as well. But the second, I'm not a fan of the super small focal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Prophet Posted March 4, 2011 Report Share Posted March 4, 2011 Quality isn't good on either. First is cool, could use some contrast in it though. The second is cluttered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENlighten+ Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 I'd love to see the second one larger. it would own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ttttttttttt Posted March 5, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 Yeah I wouldve made it bigger but it was more lq than it is now. Thanks guys. + [img]http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af50/Astro_022/serious.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tsel Posted March 5, 2011 Report Share Posted March 5, 2011 I like the new piece. Lots of color, but I think it's a bit too messy for my liking. It's hard to make out the focal with all the effects going on around it. Not necessarily the face, but the body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dolfan. Posted March 6, 2011 Report Share Posted March 6, 2011 The most recent piece is alright but looks way to cluttered with C4D's. Tone down on those only 1 or 2 is necessary, and add in some blending techniques like smudging or bleding in the backround with some proper lighting. you will improve as time goes on just keep working Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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