ttttttttttt Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 new to less new please actually reply if you read this [IMG]http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af50/Astro_022/onlyyou-1.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af50/Astro_022/wildhounds.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af50/Astro_022/gazette.png[/IMG] [IMG]http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af50/Astro_022/savage.png[/IMG] critique me good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex. Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 They're decent, the 2nd and last one are just renders pasted ontop of a background to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lumpy McRighteous Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 Bathroom passes, cuttin' classes, squeezin' asses Smokin' blunts was a daily routine, since thirteen A chubby ni[b][/b]gga on the scene Sorry, I thought this was a topic about Biggie. I like the second and last ones, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dj-Sprat Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 I like them And i know what you mean about replying... I have a Sprat Showcase thread which nobody replies on it makes you think you have made the sigs for no reason. But anyway back on topic, I do like these mate good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Prophet Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 The effects of most of them don't flow well together. 2nd would be good, if the render was blended in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kreay fufu Posted October 9, 2010 Report Share Posted October 9, 2010 [img]http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af50/Astro_022/onlyyou-1.png[/img] no flow, smudge is dull and very basic. nothing in this makes me think any more than novice. [img]http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af50/Astro_022/wildhounds.png[/img] this is just a render on a background at the minute. you have a render with natural colouring and you haven't used it or even changed it to suit the design, what a waste. novice [img]http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af50/Astro_022/gazette.png[/img] the best one for sure, a relatively successful piece in terms of effects, however i think that it is lacking. perhaps more of that mist behind the people? to give it a bit of depth. high novice could push for mod [img]http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af50/Astro_022/savage.png[/img] really not liking this, just seems like a few c4ds as a background for an unblended render. appears to lack any colouring or lighting to blend in the render, as well as lacking foreground effects. novice overall i'd say your issue is blending with colour and lighting, work on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RVD 4:20 Posted October 10, 2010 Report Share Posted October 10, 2010 Awesome . I like your use of colour on the second one . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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