im the man Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 here is my first try at batista plz tell what you think it has been updated now i am making the 4th update. and maybe final update. 4th update: [url="http://img511.imageshack.us/my.php?image=101308133900gx2.jpg"][img]http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/3852/101308133900gx2.th.jpg[/img][/url][url="http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php"][img]http://img511.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif[/img][/url] [url="http://img511.imageshack.us/my.php?image=101308133901ax1.jpg"][img]http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/5093/101308133901ax1.th.jpg[/img][/url][url="http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php"][img]http://img511.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif[/img][/url] ingame shots: [url="http://img511.imageshack.us/my.php?image=101308135200rl6.jpg"][img]http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/8750/101308135200rl6.th.jpg[/img][/url][url="http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php"][img]http://img511.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif[/img][/url] [url="http://img511.imageshack.us/my.php?image=101308135300nr3.jpg"][img]http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/3585/101308135300nr3.th.jpg[/img][/url][url="http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php"][img]http://img511.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif[/img][/url] [url="http://img511.imageshack.us/my.php?image=101308135000ab5.jpg"][img]http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/6181/101308135000ab5.th.jpg[/img][/url][url="http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php"][img]http://img511.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif[/img][/url] FORMULA Head Height: 40 Width: 100 Depth: 100 Forehead Size: -20 Height: -63 Width: 50 Depth: -44 Face Morphing Eyebrows y-axis: -49 thickness: -35 Depth: 28 Angle: 26 Eyes Size: -23 Height: -14 Width: -21 Y-Axis: -91 X-Axis: 0 Depth: 73 Angle: 13 Nose Size: 30 Height: 65 Width: 27 length: 14 Nostril Height: 8 Nostril Width: -28 Depth: -20 Angle: 21 Cheek Size:52 Y-Axis: -100 X-Axis: -16 Depth: 18 Mouth Height: 30 Thickness: -59 Width: -51 Depth: -33 Upper Lip: -100 Lower Lip: -9 Angle: -100 Jaw Height: -14 Width: -30 Depth: 39 Outterline: 18 Upperline: 61 Thickness: 100 Ears Size: 100 Angle 1: -23 Angle 2: 71 Shape: 50 Skin Age 46 Skin Tone 5/12 Color X: 88 Y: 3 Shade: -17 Specular: 60 BODY MORPH Neck Height: -10 Width: 7 Depth: 100 Chest Height: 22 Width: 19 Depth: 74 Shoulders Height: -100 Width: 100 Depth: -18 Abs Height: 42 Width: 33 Depth: 26 Waist Width: 51 Depth: 100 Arms Length: 99 Width: 42 Depth: 10 Hands Length: 85 Width: 100 Depth: 57 Legs Length: 44 Width: 11 Depth: 3 Feet Length: 57 Width: 34 Depth: 25 Body Type -61 Definition 3/9 all the layers will be on later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBRM Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 Uhm, change the colours of the back and shoulder tattoos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
im the man Posted October 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 [quote name='#1 Kane Fan' post='5105702' date='Oct 9 2008, 04:56 PM']Uhm, change the colours of the back and shoulder tattoos.[/quote] oh ok than thanks for the advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RockstarAC Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 [img]http://i38.tinypic.com/dlge87.jpg[/img] 2 obvious points strike me straight away 1) he looks like a little boy .... skin aging and wrinkles - dont be scared to experament (you can cover wrinkles with design 103/141 and reduce alpha to make them show a little in one place and not cover them in other areas to make them look deeper 2) tattoos look like body paint ... use the alpha system and make em darker EDIT - rest of suggestions added [list] [*]triangle on forehead looks bad ... granted its your caw but would a hair style like in my refs not give a better finish? either that of find better hair imo. [*]eyes ears and nose i love so well done there [*]batista has quite distinctive nose to mouth marks - its just not him with out them [*]lips are thinner [*]top lip has more shape to it (pointier) [*]jaw should be wider ... i wouldnt make shin go any lower either [*]jaw outline also must be wider [*]you need some low alpha stubble to rugged him up a little (remember my little boy comment) [*]id prefer to see some real hair used for the beard (even if you combine it with a design for texture... also remember you can make it larger and cover it with designs) [*]as for tats see earlier comment .... darken and lower alpha dramatically... i like the shape of arm tats. [/list] i seem to have a feeling your quite new to this and you havnt been exposed to all the different techniques there are to be used... try to experament and its not against the rules to see how other people do something for insperation.... but if u do copy something exact do give credit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMD. Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 Its solid... i'll be back with some suggestions tommorow cause i am really tired. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fivestarpny018 Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 make his jaw bigger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
im the man Posted October 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 [quote name='RockstarAC' post='5107497' date='Oct 10 2008, 05:29 AM'][img]http://i38.tinypic.com/dlge87.jpg[/img] 2 obvious points strike me straight away 1) he looks like a little boy .... skin aging and wrinkles - dont be scared to experament (you can cover wrinkles with design 103/141 and reduce alpha to make them show a little in one place and not cover them in other areas to make them look deeper 2) tattoos look like body paint ... use the alpha system and make em darker EDIT - rest of suggestions added [list] [*]triangle on forehead looks bad ... granted its your caw but would a hair style like in my refs not give a better finish? either that of find better hair imo. [*]eyes ears and nose i love so well done there [*]batista has quite distinctive nose to mouth marks - its just not him with out them [*]lips are thinner [*]top lip has more shape to it (pointier) [*]jaw should be wider ... i wouldnt make shin go any lower either [*]jaw outline also must be wider [*]you need some low alpha stubble to rugged him up a little (remember my little boy comment) [*]id prefer to see some real hair used for the beard (even if you combine it with a design for texture... also remember you can make it larger and cover it with designs) [*]as for tats see earlier comment .... darken and lower alpha dramatically... i like the shape of arm tats. [/list] i seem to have a feeling your quite new to this and you havnt been exposed to all the different techniques there are to be used... try to experament and its not against the rules to see how other people do something for insperation.... but if u do copy something exact do give credit.[/quote] hey thanks i will do that thanks for your coments i will fix those up right now [quote name='RockerRC' post='5107688' date='Oct 10 2008, 05:58 AM']make his jaw bigger[/quote] i will do thanks for your help [quote name='OneManDynasty' post='5107514' date='Oct 10 2008, 05:31 AM']Its solid... i'll be back with some suggestions tommorow cause i am really tired.[/quote] oh alright thanks man i like ur advice it comes in handy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RockstarAC Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 please fix ur signature lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMD. Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 Ok man here are some suggestions. Work on the facial hair. Add some facial hair and cover it up with designs. But before you do it... add face paint 55 or 56. Work on the hairline and on the hair. Make the hair darker and try to rework the hair cause the design you are using at the moment is bad tbh. Change the face skin and work on the nosebridge and on the nostrils. Add width to the nosebridge and make the nostrils abit thinner. Work on the skin aging. In my opinion he looks way too young. Change the lip style and make them abit darker. Decrease some height on the head and add a bit width. Work on the jaw. In my opinion its a bit too big. Add some facial hair and decrease the alpha til 30.... it should look like stubbles. Work abit on the outline. Also work on the upperline. The cheeks are abit too round in my opinion. Work abit on the eyebrows. The mouth is too width and the underlip is abit too thin. Add 5 clicks to the underlip and lessen width on the whole mouth. Lessen abit height on the eyebrows. Decrease the height of the eyes abit. [url="http://i35.tinypic.com/kexohj.png"]"The Animal" Batista[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse. Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 not bad bro i like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTS. Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 looks canny good man, solid start i see batista btw what template did you start with??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMD. Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 I forgot to suggest the tattoos etc. Nevermind here are some suggestions. The tattoos are quite good. Make them really dark and lessen the alpha on 25 or 30. I would also suggest work abit on the left arm tattoo. I can't see red in it. Here are some ref pictures of his tattoos. I know they aren't the best but they are very useful in my opinion. [url="http://i35.tinypic.com/10sggoz.png"]Back Tattoo[/url] [url="http://i33.tinypic.com/295zg92.png"]Right Arm Tattoo[/url] [url="http://i33.tinypic.com/jp7gr4.png"]Left Arm Tattoo[/url] [url="http://i33.tinypic.com/mrpgnr.png"]Abdomen Tattoo[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
im the man Posted October 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 [quote name='OMD.' post='5112242' date='Oct 11 2008, 04:51 AM']I forgot to suggest the tattoos etc. Nevermind here are some suggestions. The tattoos are quite good. Make them really dark and lessen the alpha on 25 or 30. I would also suggest work abit on the left arm tattoo. I can't see red in it. Here are some ref pictures of his tattoos. I know they aren't the best but they are very useful in my opinion. [url="http://i35.tinypic.com/10sggoz.png"]Back Tattoo[/url] [url="http://i33.tinypic.com/295zg92.png"]Right Arm Tattoo[/url] [url="http://i33.tinypic.com/jp7gr4.png"]Left Arm Tattoo[/url] [url="http://i33.tinypic.com/mrpgnr.png"]Abdomen Tattoo[/url][/quote] hey thanks man the suggestions are great i will get to work on them right away and thanks for the ref pics they r great thanks man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMD. Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 The update looks abit better but add age to him. 20 or 30 clicks. Work on the facial hair. Scrap this design you use at the moment and add facial hair to him and cover it up with some designs. It should look like it does at the moment but just as facial hair not designs... sorry for bad english i can't really discribe it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RockstarAC Posted October 11, 2008 Report Share Posted October 11, 2008 [img]http://i34.tinypic.com/25842o2.jpg[/img] will edit you have made some good improvements :ot: including your sig id like you to do an experament ..... go and change your skin aging to something like 30, then cycle through the skin tones, then observe the wrinkle set which resenble his lips and eyes. then once you get the correct shape correct reduce skin aging ... and IF theres an error for example unwanted forehead lines .... cover em with design 103. his skins just looking too young [list] [*]back tat.... add more green and darken - reduce alpha [*]top lip looks unchanged [*]think you need an eyebrow with more dence hair [*]would encourage facial hair .... even if its just stubble if your keep to keep your design [*]widen the underwear design [*]imo your hairs taken a turn for the worsed? its never been that thick and that short at same time i dont think - what hair are yo going for? [/list] i think above changes alone will help out muchly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
im the man Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 [quote name='RockstarAC' post='5116767' date='Oct 12 2008, 02:45 AM'][img]http://i34.tinypic.com/25842o2.jpg[/img] will edit you have made some good improvements :ot: including your sig id like you to do an experament ..... go and change your skin aging to something like 30, then cycle through the skin tones, then observe the wrinkle set which resenble his lips and eyes. then once you get the correct shape correct reduce skin aging ... and IF theres an error for example unwanted forehead lines .... cover em with design 103. his skins just looking too young [list] [*]back tat.... add more green and darken - reduce alpha [*]top lip looks unchanged [*]think you need an eyebrow with more dence hair [*]would encourage facial hair .... even if its just stubble if your keep to keep your design [*]widen the underwear design [*]imo your hairs taken a turn for the worsed? its never been that thick and that short at same time i dont think - what hair are yo going for? [/list] i think above changes alone will help out muchly[/quote] thank you very much for saying i done some improvements i will keep working on it and i liked my sig thank you very much lol [quote name='OMD.' post='5115214' date='Oct 11 2008, 07:06 PM']The update looks abit better but add age to him. 20 or 30 clicks. Work on the facial hair. Scrap this design you use at the moment and add facial hair to him and cover it up with some designs. It should look like it does at the moment but just as facial hair not designs... sorry for bad english i can't really discribe it. [/quote] dont worry about ur english man i understand what ur trying to say thanks for the advice i will get back to work on it man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest GoreMachine Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Very much improvment on what i seen on the first pic id say work on the jaw its way toooooooo wide and too much hight aslo.another thing is work on the eyes a bit more but very nicely improvement i can see it in him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
im the man Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 [quote name='GoreMachine' post='5120739' date='Oct 12 2008, 03:29 PM']Very much improvment on what i seen on the first pic id say work on the jaw its way toooooooo wide and too much hight aslo.another thing is work on the eyes a bit more but very nicely improvement i can see it in him.[/quote] thanks alot i will get right to work on that thanks for ur comments im updating him in a min so i hope u can tell me what you think of this update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMD. Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Another good update. I can see Dave in the face good job. Lessen alpha on the tattoos and work abit on the jaw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
im the man Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 [quote name='OMD.' post='5120938' date='Oct 12 2008, 05:53 PM']Another good update. I can see Dave in the face good job. Lessen alpha on the tattoos and work abit on the jaw.[/quote] ok i will get to work on that in a min thanks for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMD. Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Add more age and go back to the jaw you had before (2.update). It was in my opinion really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sandman!â„¢ Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 body morphing is gr8 make the design on back of pants white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
im the man Posted October 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 [quote name='nWo Sandman!' post='5120997' date='Oct 12 2008, 06:23 PM']body morphing is gr8 make the design on back of pants white.[/quote] oh ok man thanks for the comments will do [quote name='OMD.' post='5120979' date='Oct 12 2008, 06:16 PM']Add more age and go back to the jaw you had before (2.update). It was in my opinion really good.[/quote] alright will go back to the last jaw thanks for all your help so far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMD. Posted October 13, 2008 Report Share Posted October 13, 2008 The update looks way better. Glad to see how great you are improving. Add some facial hair.... and make them like stubbles. You can make them like stubbles with low alpha. Add facial hair above the mouth with low alpha. Decrease width on the mouth. Make the hair abit lighter. Decrease alpha on the hair... not sure if you can . Make the ears abit bigger. Maybe 5 clicks. Decrease alpha on the facial hair. Work abit on the outline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
im the man Posted October 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2008 [quote name='OMD.' post='5127401' date='Oct 13 2008, 11:01 PM']The update looks way better. Glad to see how great you are improving. Add some facial hair.... and make them like stubbles. You can make them like stubbles with low alpha. Add facial hair above the mouth with low alpha. Decrease width on the mouth. Make the hair abit lighter. Decrease alpha on the hair... not sure if you can . Make the ears abit bigger. Maybe 5 clicks. Decrease alpha on the facial hair. Work abit on the outline.[/quote] i will get right to work on that. so alot of stubbel lol and work on the outline and the ears have to be bigger lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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