R0B Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 [img]http://i37.tinypic.com/148ns41.jpg[/img] [img]http://i37.tinypic.com/2qtjzls.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMD. Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 It looks quite good... ill be back with some suggestions when i have time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simply Priceless Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 how many layers spare do you have? what id suggest (if you have layers of course) is to look at maxblaze kozlov and try and do something similer with the hair as hairchoices arnt brilliant and i think he done a good job with his Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMD. Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 ^^^^^ @ SP It looks like he has 20 layers left. 1 Layer - Elbowpads, 1 Layer - Kneepads, 1 Layer - Boots... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTS. Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 and to add to what SP said, also add some low alpha stubble in their and make it greyish like Kozlovs, so use wither a goatte or Templates 17 or 18, but loos nice so far [u][/u] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse. Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 it's alright, i don't know what to suggest though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'Nova. Posted October 6, 2008 Report Share Posted October 6, 2008 I agree with all the past posts, hair needs changing . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest GoreMachine Posted October 8, 2008 Report Share Posted October 8, 2008 I like this alot maybe work on the mouth a bit mroe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dro. Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 i see some kozlov in it, good job . i would change hair color to brown Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twitch Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 Looks default, skin tone wise, you said you have 20 layers right? work on the skin tone alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Here comes the pain Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 the head height and forehead height if you look in pics his hairl line is alot lower Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RockstarAC Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 [img]http://i37.tinypic.com/107jhaa.jpg[/img] hair is too dark hair is too pointy (maybe the dark colour makes it look sharper) his skin is too smooh on your caw (im thinking nose to mouth likes specifically) ... more skin aging needed and it will help with a "rough" look forehead is UBER SMOOTH i think youve covered wrinkles if so lower alpha on whats covering them up so you can just see some texture can you raise nosteral height with out moving the tip of the nose? if so i advise you do so can the mouth (especially bottom lip) be thinner? angle mouth downwards more perhaps chin is overdone - its deffo too wide and perhaps a couple clicks shorter elbow pads .... either wrong ones or add a skin coloured oval knee pads .... detial would ne nice .... his attire doesnt use many layers im sure you can add some detail trunks .... there too big - thy nearly hit his belly button and around the outside of the leg is too deep try trunks 4 stylised to smallest pair (i think ur already using number 4) boots number 2 will give you that little bump for the tongue should you want to match the refs. i have given a large list but i do like this caw - especially face id like to see a side view Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest GoreMachine Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 Did i ever say i had 20 layers left?hmmm nope also its far from defualt my friend.Also thanks for the help RockstarAC and everyone else .Also i will not use any other persons caw i try not to do that unless i really have to... opps sorry i thought this was mine wrong post my bad please ignore the top one ^^^^ i feel bad sorry y2j Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RockstarAC Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 [quote name='GoreMachine' post='5107470' date='Oct 9 2008, 07:57 PM']Did i ever say i had 20 layers left?hmmm nope also its far from defualt my friend.Also thanks for the help RockstarAC and everyone else .Also i will not use any other persons caw i try not to do that unless i really have to... opps sorry i thought this was mine wrong post my bad please ignore the top one ^^^^ i feel bad sorry y2j[/quote] this seems like an idiot thing i would do. wow .... feels great when its not you for once Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest GoreMachine Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 LOL i kno again sorry y2j LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CodeBr3akerY2J Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 its alright. dont take it so personally dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R0B Posted October 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 NP goremachine easily done lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTS. Posted October 10, 2008 Report Share Posted October 10, 2008 yup, we've all nearly or actually done it, i nearly did it when i showed my Hogan and Y2J had his Hogan out, nealr went to check and [post about my own CAW in his topic until i realised what i was doing...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TBRM Posted October 12, 2008 Report Share Posted October 12, 2008 Lessen angle on the mouth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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