Mr. Kite Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 This is my first CAW ever, and I'm not good, so tell me what to improve on. I know I suck, so I don't need to hear it from every person please. Constructive critsicm is welcome. [img]http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x190/dx1212_2007/100_0142.jpg[/img] [img]http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x190/dx1212_2007/100_0143.jpg[/img] *Pics are bad, but I don't have a cap card, so this is the best I could do!* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beast And The Harlot Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 maybe look at some ref pics for the hair colour. Make the eyes less big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michael-The-Shape-Myers Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 ^^ Ya defenly look at refs but giid start i'll give it a 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marburyman3 Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 I'll give it a 4/10 from the side it resembles him but alltogether , nah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Kite Posted November 14, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 Ok, I was looking at pics when I made him but I see where you are coming from. I have an update where I darkened the hair slightly and made the eyes smaller. I can't upload it now because my brother has the game, but I'll do it as soon as I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
«Åd®€Ñà £Ìñ€» Posted November 15, 2007 Report Share Posted November 15, 2007 looks like him, but the face is to wide. make his hair darker also. But it's a good first CAW Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Kite Posted November 15, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2007 [quote name='.:HHH Forever:.' post='3239651' date='Nov 14 2007, 06:02 PM']Ok, I was looking at pics when I made him but I see where you are coming from. [b]I have an update where I darkened the hair [/b]slightly and made the eyes smaller. I can't upload it now because my brother has the game, but I'll do it as soon as I can.[/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Y2John Posted November 16, 2007 Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 [b]bad[/b] 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Kite Posted November 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2007 I appreciate the constructive critisicm. Don't reply in any of my topics again. Ok, about the update, I have to get batteries for my cam then I will take the pics. It's finally updated!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marburyman3 Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 Ok, with the update, I change it from a 4/10 to a...........6.5/10. Not great but its definitely better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Kite Posted November 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 Thanks, but I need help on what to improve on, so please lets get some constructive critisicm please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gazza Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 it might be the eyes or the face skin that makes it look off, just concentrate on those areas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Kite Posted November 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 I have skin tone 12 on, do you think I should just take it off and put skin tone 1 on? [i]hmM[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gazza Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 [quote name='.:HHH Forever:.' post='3255103' date='Nov 17 2007, 02:59 PM']I have skin tone 12 on, do you think I should just take it off and put skin tone 1 on? [i]hmM[/i][/quote] Im not sure yet cause i havent tryed to create Jericho yet, i could go threw them if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Kite Posted November 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 If you could that'd be great. They are the skin tones and I'm debating whether to use 1 or twelve.[i] hmM[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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