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Motor City Machine Guns by Mr. Kite - UPDATE 11/15 - Sabin Update, Shelley Preview

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#1 Mr. Kite

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 03:52 AM

This is my first CAW for WWE '13. I'm going to say it's early and everything, but that mostly means I'm insecure about it. I worked pretty hard on it, and I think I like it. Just try to be easy, I'm not too good at this in the first place. :P

Update - 11/15
- Facial Tweaks
- Shelley Preview

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Edited by Mr. Kite, 15 November 2012 - 09:36 PM.


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Posted 15 November 2012 - 03:53 AM

Deff see Sabin in this, solid start.

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 03:57 AM

Not bad at all. You should definitely cover up that mole on his cheek though.

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 03:58 AM

I was contemplating smoothing out the cheeks entirely with designs, and still might. Thanks for the comment.

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 04:31 AM

Nice start. But the details on his eyes make him look old. Very solid start.

#6 Mr. Kite

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 05:38 PM

Working on this some this morning, may have an update soon. Please continue to comment! :)

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 06:19 PM

Yeah this is pretty good.

Are you planning on doing Shelley as well?

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 06:55 PM

Nice update. I've got a few suggestions, but this is shaping up nicely. I hope you make Shelley too. :cool:

-Increase cranium height a bit
-Increase eyebrow angle by about 5
-Increase nostril height, as the nose is looking overly thin in that profile shot
-Decrease cheek size some

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 09:38 PM

Cheers for suggestions, and I already have a Shelly in the works. ;) If there is anyone willing to do some attires for these, let me know. I could really use them.

Update: Added Shelley. I wasn't sure about what hair to use, so I chose this one. I don't know why that one pic is larger, it may just be photobucket being slow. And I have the day off work today so that's why updates are faster.

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 10:08 PM

That's a solid start on Shelley. I hope someone can come through and assist you with the attires. I would if I could. lol

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 10:11 PM

Shelley looks pretty good. It's kinda off-putting that you used the same skin and eyebrows for both of them. I think skin 1 is more fitting for Shelley. You should also do custom brows. None of the in-game options are right for him.

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 10:25 PM

pac if u still have that shelly morph written down from last year then that would help toward this, sabin is lookin good...but somethin about the eye area bugs me. maybe just need more blending between designs

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 11:17 PM

I was going back and forth on skin 1 and 10 for Shelley and I guess I just went with this. I'll look into the other one. As for the brows, I'm not sure how to do custom ones as I'm not very CAW savvy quite yet.

@Shock, if you like them, maybe you could use the faces for your IMPACT topic and maybe do attires? That's the only way I can see attires getting done, lol.

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 11:23 PM

haha i always falter at attires for these two. get one done and then i give up. its usually an old sabin attire as always liked hm more then shelley haha. and at the moment onlt focusing on the top tna guys currently in the company. when i start making multiple saves and have a tna only save i will maybe make attres for these two...but im kinda hoping someone will make them long before that lol

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 11:26 PM

I understand. I hope someone will want to do them. I'm complete crap at PT.

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Posted 16 November 2012 - 06:05 AM

Sabin looks great, but yeah, he does look a bit old in the eyes. I can definitely appreciate how hard he is to capture.

Shelley's looking good, too. There's something a bit off, but I can't pin it down. It might be the skin. I think his beard could be thicker, too.

And maybe ask Aj for Sabin and Shelley textures?

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Posted 16 November 2012 - 04:57 PM

Not bad, may have to take you up on that offer

#18 Mr. Kite

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Posted 17 November 2012 - 04:56 AM

I hope you do, I'd like to get these uploaded. I'll continue finalizing the faces.

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Posted 20 December 2012 - 09:30 AM

Are these still being worked on?





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