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#21 Creepia

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Posted 25 June 2012 - 05:41 PM

To debut him against Punk might be a way to go. Punk doesn't need to be the WWE Champion at that time so they don't have to feud for the title right away, you could bring up a story from the Indy's and have them re-unite it or another way like that. Remember you can move Punk down to Upper-Midcard and still keep his credibility and then work your way back up.

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Posted 25 June 2012 - 06:08 PM

Its more him thinking of a realistic stand point, theres a almost blank slate when you go from Indys to WWE, otherwise countless would of been on RAW and SD, if the story fits but I don't think WWE will feud someone just because the indys, Ambrose is a unknown to majority of the WWE universe and him going in and feuding with Punk would be unlikely, a Lord Tensai route would work with him occasionally fighting Punk or X mid/upper/ME wrestler before starting a feud would be a route he should look at personally

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Posted 25 June 2012 - 06:25 PM

Yeah I guess you're right. Debuting him against Punk wouldn't be the best idea, but having an angle with him not long after his debut might work, like after a couple months.

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Posted 25 June 2012 - 07:07 PM

A very impressive promo. It sounded like Moxley to me, but then again that's my opinion. Can't wait to see how you write him in the ring.

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Posted 25 June 2012 - 10:44 PM

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' dean ambrose home video '

saturday the fourteenth of july ; two thousand and twelve

sixteen days till raw 1000

" talking. " on deanambrose.com


Open scene and we see Dean Ambrose walking around infront of a steel fence, behind that was racing traffic. Ambrose had a cigarette in his mouth and took a big drag before slowly exhaling the smoke into the air and bringing the cigarette down between his fingers, turning to the camera before opening his arms out wide and looking up towards the sky. A few moments passed before he looked down, messing with his hair before pointing the cigarette hand towards the camera, beginning to talk.


" You know I woke up today with one thought just constantly replaying, one thing that just drives me every single day, gives me hope. Do you think there's anyone out there that can actually help me?.... anyone out there that can give me the guidance I need without wanting to lock me into a straight-jacket and throw me into a padded prison cell?.... are people so close minded that they see the state that i'm in and immediately call for the authorities just because I act a little differently from everyone else?! I find it wrong that someone as great as me, with the intellectual capacity of an entire nation, with the thought process of a super-computer would need to be kept behind bars just because I make occasionally need to take my frustrations out, frustrations that are caused by the constant poking and bullying by those considering mentally sane! Maybe i'm the normal one, maybe everyone else is different! I know i'm okay, if I wasn't okay I wouldn't be the very best around in a sport filled with intellectuals! CM Punk, Chris Jericho, I bet they got their degrees, their little piece of beige paper with the cursive print and the red ribbon... and that supposedly means they have a wider thought process, respected more in society?... well i'm here to prove them wrong. Very soon the wrestling world as we know it will come to the realization that they must be obliged to kiss the feet of one man and one man only, not because I can sell the most t-shirts, not because i'm airbrushed onto the pay-per-view posters, but because i'm the most vicious, ruthless and best wrestler in the world... and you'll realise it very soon. Count on it. "


Dean walked out of the frame this time, leaving quickly and heading over to a car and slamming a closed fist onto the bonnet. Dean then quickly left the scene as the alarms went off, not wanting to take the responsibility.


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I'm considering numerous different starting points at the moment, however I do have one in mind that may boost his chances on the card. CM Punk, i'm unsure yet, it could happen, could not. Nothings happened till it's posted, but i'm happy you're already speculating when he'll debut... and to Poe, thanks for your feedback, glad to see that you think i'm capturing him.


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' money in the bank results '

' sunday the fifteenth of july, two thousand and twelve '

' live from US airways center, phoenix, arizona '


World Heavyweight Championship

Sheamus b. Alberto Del Rio.


RAW Money in the Bank Match

Kofi Kingston b. The Miz, Kane, Big Show, Zack Ryder, Jack Swagger, Rey Mysterio and R-Truth.


Singles Match

Ryback b. Heath Slater.


SmackDown Money in the Bank Match

Dolph Ziggler b. Damien Sandow, Christian, Cody Rhodes, Tyson Kidd, Drew McIntyre, Randy Orton and Mark Henry.


WWE Championship

Daniel Bryan b. CM Punk.


Grudge Match

John Cena b. Chris Jericho


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Posted 26 June 2012 - 01:37 PM

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YPcGLGnD95c&feature=hd1


This video was posted today on WWE.com, four hours before the 1999th episode of RAW aired. To many, the culprit behind this promo is obvious however the majority of the wrestling world has either not seen the promo or simply can not identify the mysterious character.



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Posted 26 June 2012 - 02:37 PM

Quite interesting. Of course we all know who it is lol.

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Posted 26 June 2012 - 04:26 PM

^ I haven't got the foggiest idea who that could be lol JK but dunno what video he jacked it from tho looks like Stone Cold mainly because its a WWE video

Not much to say about your promo's as they are just building him nothing that could advance a story really

The MITB results have something to do with it tho with Punk losing I deffo see something happening now

The video gave absolutely nothing away and Im still wondering what video you jacked it from, if this was real life i'd wonder who it was

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Posted 26 June 2012 - 06:45 PM

First of all, I really like your layout. It's unique and stands out but not to the point where it gets annoying; I like that. The Dean Ambrose "home video" is a very good idea, I don't I've seen it before in a diary. It seems like a great way to introduce Ambrose's character. Due to the home videos, I'm assuming he's a heel (a crazy heel?). His menacing personality is cool and unpredictable. The Money In The Bank results must have something to do with his debut, otherwise I doubt you would type them up. To be honest, I wouldn't be a fan of him debuting against CM Punk. Punk's the number two full time babyface in the company and to your average fan, Ambrose is essentially an unknown. Personally, I would put him in a midcard feud and see how that goes. But hey, it's your diary, not mine. Overall, things are looking very good IMO. There is a lot of mystery surrounding your diary and I would imagine that's what you intended. Just keep doing what you're doing man.

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Posted 27 June 2012 - 01:27 AM

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' 1000th episode of monday night raw '

' live from the scottrade center, st.louis, missouri '

' monday the twenty third of july, two thousand and twelve '

' chapter six " well hello there " '

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FxnFJG6CW20


Wow! The opening credits roll as RAW starts its new generation! With the new theme song for Monday Night RAW rolling, the fans stand and raise their signs in jubilation as this St.Louis, Missouri crowd gets pumped for the three hours in store. The opening comes to an end with an array of fireworks sprouting from cannons on the stage. Sparkles of a multitude of different colours spray over the heads of the audience and fizzle out. The cameras on cranes pan over the crowd and they all raise their signs as they cheer in the direction of the camera. With the music softening and playing in the background, the camera slowly fades to the image of Michael Cole, Jerry Lawler and Booker T in suits as they sit behind the announcing desk. Michael Cole waited for a moment as the noise died down before welcoming the viewers at home.


Micheal Cole

" Ladies and Gentlemen! You are joining us live on Monday Night RAW's One Thousand Episode spectacular! Live from the Scottrade Center in St.Louis, Missouri! I'm Michael Cole joined by my broadcast partners for tonight, Jerry 'the king' Lawler and from Smackdown, Booker T! What a treat we have for you tonight! "


Jerry Lawler

" Oh boy! Am I excited for tonight! What a spectacle we have tonight as RAW is returned to by legends from the past, new faces and we finally find out our new general manager from now on, and you can vote on twitter for who you would pick now. You've got the choices of Vickie Guerrero, 'the hardcore legend' Mick Foley, 'The Million Dollar man' Ted DiBiase and our very own Booker T! "


Booker T

" Oh wow i'm so excited ya' know! Ya' know by tonight I could be the leader of this whole show man, i'm so excited and hey?! you want a good candidate then vote for Booker, get dat' managements attention back 'der. "


Michael Cole

" Well personally i'm casting my vote right now, and i'm voting for Vickie Guerrero! "


Jerry Lawler

" Oh no Cole! Why you gotta do that? She's the most disgusting woman I think i've ever laid eyes on. "


Michael Cole

" Well in my opinion she put on the best show, and rightfully deserves it! She's a proud supporter of Michael Cole, you know?! Maybe i'll finally get to do this show without you two goons after this! "


Jerry Lawler

" Oh you wish Cole, you wish! "


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wMCgrLIM6Z8


Interrupting the ramblings of the three men behind the desk, the two screeches of white noise before the familiar sound of Living Colours - 'Cult of Personality!' The arena turned a light red and blue as the fans simultaneously rose to their feet and most raised their arms in jubilation as they watched the entrance stage. With the sound of their cheers suddenly getting way louder as the sleek figure of CM Punk emerged from behind the colourful screen. Sporting his own branded 'Best in the World' t-shirt over his wrestling attire he walked to the edge of the stage, just before the ramp, and shouted to the fans... something they responded too. Punk watched the crowd for a moment, dropping to one knee on the stage. Brushing the arena floor with his taped right hand, Punk brought the hand to his nose before doing his famous 'Clobbering time' taunt! He'd leap up and turn, arms spread out wide as he walked backwards down the ramp. The fans were louder than ever as he turned back on his heels, stepping up the ring steps and across the apron. Slipping through the ropes, CM Punk slowly stepped to the opposite turnbuckle and leapt onto the second rope whilst raising his arms into the arm, beckoning the crowd to go louder and they did, arms raised and signs held aloft! With that, Punk held his hand downwards as Justin Roberts chucked his microphone from the booth and Punk catching. He'd nod in approval before hopping down and bouncing gently off the ring mat. Waiting for the crowd to die down, Punk waited in the center of the ring whilst the chanting of his name started.


" Well... that was an unfortunate circumstance... The longest WWE Championship reign within the past three years comes to a crashing halt because the WWE's resident goat-face decides he can't take me on, one versus one fairly! No, when the referee had his back turned, when the referee was dealing with AJ, he decided what better than to attack me from behind with a low-blow and then trapped me in the Yes Lock!... I never tapped out, I didn't feel he deserved the satisfaction knowing he made me quit... I remained in the hold and it damaged my neck pretty bad. When I couldn't respond to the three count, the referee called for the bell, stood Daniel Bryan up and raised his hand. Just like that, one mistake, the reign came crashing to a halt and now we're left with a goat-face prancing around the arena shouting 'yes!' in everybody's face... You know I could be annoyed about this whole situation, I could throw my toys out of the pram... but this is the one thousandth episode of Monday Night RAW!... and i've got a title rematch on the contract! [ The crowd went wild as Punk began to nod to the sound of the claps. ] That's right! Tonight, on the one thousandth episode extravaganza we're going to see the Pipebomb, the Straight-Edge Saviour, the Messiah take back what still is rightfully mine and i'm going to hold it from today till the two thousandth episode of RAW, if that's possible... So seeing as i'm ready, and I saw Daniel Bryan, he looked ready, and you people are ready right?! [ The crowd went wild as Punk grinned. ] Well then that's all the go I need for this to happen, get out here goat-face! [ Punk lowered the microphone, using his freehand to strip off his shirt and throw it into the audience. He waited for a moment before approaching the ropes that faced the entrance and lifting the microphone back up. ] Come on Bryan, you can't hide back there forever, i've got a contract that says you've gotta get your ass o- "


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eBR3vwYJCiE


The crowd rose to their feet, cheering whoever had decided to interrupt the promo and awaited the entrant with great expectations. Signs rose from seats, the odd one displaying the name "Secret Weapon" and a small managed to find its way onto Punk's face as he knew the man from the back. The symphony slowly continued before from behind the entrance screen strolled the man awaited, the 'street dog' Dean Ambrose had finally risen from Florida Championship Wrestling and he approached the end of the stage as he watched Punk. Sporting his trademark leather jacket over his wrestling attire, Dean flicked his head to the side to rid his eyes of some of his stringy hair. In his hand was a microphone and he paced from side to side, eyes fixated on Punk who simply took a step back while stroking his beard, shaking his head. Dean then stopped his constant pacing and began to advance down the ramp slowly as his music cut. He lifted the microphone to his lips as the crowd watched with intent.


" For those who don't know it yet, maybe you've never opened your eyes, maybe you've never looked past this company, maybe you've never felt the need to change the channel while you listen to this mindless drivel, i'm Dean Ambrose! I'm this companies secret weapon and i've quickly become the most hyped star in the business today. Before we get into the whole 'why i'm here' business, let me give you a little factfile on just who Dean Ambrose is. [ Dean reached the end of the ramp at this point. ] Dean Ambrose is a little different to your average superstar ladies and gentlemen, Dean Ambrose is the best wrestler in the business at the moment... The very best, i'm better than anyone on the circuits, anyone in the back... and the nobody standing in the ring right now. [ The crowd suddenly realised this guys intentions and began to boo as he climbed the ring steps whilst he talked. ] You will be quiet and give me the respect I deserve! Don't think I won't come out there and hand you the biggest beating of your life just because your hiding behind the barricades, that's not a magic bubble that blocks me from you, so shut the hell up! [ The crowd booed again, some of the men in the front rows beckoning him over. Ambrose focused on one of them, pointing and shaking his head. ] No sir, sit down before you embarrass yourself... [ Dean stepped through the ropes now, returning his focus to CM Punk who had slipped to the opposite corner. ] Why am I here? To rid you all of this intolerant roster of fools that proclaim that they're the 'best' in the business just because they hold a belt plated with metal. I don't need titles, I don't want them, any title in this company doesn't reach my reputation... I'm here because their are people like this guy running their mouths... [ Dean walks to the center of the ring where Punk joins him, Ambrose smirking as he stands nose to nose with Punk. ] ...CM Punk, are you finished? I mean an eight month run comes crashing to a crimson end just last week and you're already wanting to hop back on your high-horse and take it back? You know you used to be the indy boy that hated having his photo taken, now you're showing up to photo-shoots and having your face airbrushed onto everything that comes with the WWE logo?... Just because you called yourself the best in the world and cut a crappy promo once? Get out of here. If that's how you got the top, can you imagine how quickly i'll break it here? I will wreck the scale and smash through the proverbial roof! [ The crowd hisses and boos as Dean turns to them. ] How about you retain your dignity and seat down before I run up there and twist your face of your skull! [ The fan that Dean pointed at began to sit down as Dean chuckled. ] ...but Punk, I know i'm intruding... you've got a rematch right? [ CM Punk nodded as Dean began to shake his head. ] Wrong! You see when they saw my potential, when the guys in the back saw the aura that I provide, the monster inside... they gave me the opportunity. They told me I could choose to debut against anyone, anytime. I waited for tonight, I waited for the inevitable when the self proclaimed best in the world was knocked off his pedistool, and now i'm here to finish you off. You want Daniel Bryan tonight? You've gotta beat me before you do it. I pick you Punk! I'm gonna make an example out of you and when i'm done, when the ring mat is a piece of torn blood soaked tartan and you're left in a state that leaves you on the sidelines for a few years, you're gonna wish you never came out and ran your mouth. You knew I was coming and you decided leave yourself a target... Get a referee out here right now! "


Dean threw the microphone at the floor, it bounced out of the ring and to the floor as Punk simply lifted his microphone back up.


" Okay, but remember Dean... when you wake up later after I send you to sleep, you're gonna wish you never signed the dotted line. Let me give you a welcome to be proud of. "


Punk then chucked his microphone out of the ring whilst Dean threw off his leather jacket and hung it onto the ring post. A referee seemed to slide under the ropes from nowhere as he approached both men and checked their possessions. Once all was safe, the ring bell was sounded.


' MATCH STARTS '

With the sound of the ring bell, Dean Ambrose slowly stepped away from his corner and over to Punk who remained where he was. Shouting something at him, CM Punk seemed offended as he walked towards Ambrose quickly and pushed him backwards. Dean simply staggered backwards before smirking, shaking his finger as he walked towards the center of the ring. Punk slapped Ambrose this time and he snapped backwards, grasping his face before turning to Punk once more, this time darting at the waist of Punk and wrapped two arms around the abdomen as he slithered behind. Punk began to push at the wrists that were locked around him, physically grabbing both and trying to tear them apart. Dean's grip didn't release though as his arms tightened, pulling Punk off his feet and down onto his stomach with a slam! With Punk on the floor, Ambrose pinned him down with the right hand whilst maneuvering to the left arm of CM Punk. Whilst holding the former champion down, Dean Ambrose began to repeatedly slam his fist into the back of Punk. CM Punk used his initiative, rolling over and pulling Ambrose from his knees to the floor. Punk quickly countered into the same hold Dean had, kneeing Dean in the side of abdomen. Punk then wrapped an arm around the head of Ambrose and tried to lock in a cross-face! Dean over-powered Punk and got up to his knees before then to his feet, Punk till holding the face of Dean. With a quick strike to the abdomen, Dean was free from the hold and wrapped an arm under Punk, pulling him up and slamming him back down for a standard suplex! Punk on the back-burner so far in this match as Dean scrambled for a cover. Slapping an arm over the chest of Punk, he pinned his shoulders down! One! Kickout! Punk jerked a shoulder up as the match got going.


With that first kickout, Dean crawled around to the back of Punk and wrapped an under and around the neck. Wrenching a seated headlock, Punk began to notice his lack of oxygen and thought fast, rolling backwards over the torso of Dean and to a standing position. As Dean went to scramble upwards, Punk hit a head-kick! Ambrose staggered backwards slowly, gripping the spot hit by the boot. Punk followed him up with a clothesline and Dean crashed down to the floor. The same happened again as Ambrose got up and met a second clothesline before the penultimate third! Ambrose slammed down and Punk quickly waited as he got up, hitting a suplex of his own to the six foot four frame of Dean! CM Punk dropped to his knees quickly, falling down to his knees and covering Ambrose! One! Two! Th-! Kickout from Dean! The crowd were into this match as Dean slowly rolled around the floor. Punk took another step back as he taunted the crowd. Dean soon got up and Punk ran at him, aiming for a big boot that Ambrose ducked out of the way from. As Punk continued to run into the ropes, Dean Ambrose turned and lifted his own boot for the big boot of his own! Punk ducked out of the way of that one, this time Punk hitting off the ropes and into a dropkick that sent Dean backwards and through the middle ropes! Punk stopped in the center of the ring and raised his arms out to his side whilst Ambrose stood at the barricade, turning around in a daze to meet the trademark CM Punk suicide dive! The crowd were in hysterics as they watched him stand again, Dean squirming on the floor. The commentators began to really big up the dive before calling that RAW would return soon, the show heading for an ad break.


We return to the match with Ambrose and Punk standing in the center of the ring, exchanging rights and lefts with neither really getting an upper hand. With quick thinking, Punk began to use quick low kicks that shook Ambrose enough to make him lean down. Taking a step back, Punk hit his trademark high kick to the head! Ambrose staggered back one step before running at Punk quickly, really catching the superstar off guard as he speared him across the ring into a turnbuckle! Punk felt the force of being smashed into the corner and reacted with a strike to Ambrose's head! CM Punk quickly wrapped an arm over the head of Dean, DDT'ing him into the turnbuckle behind him! Such a unique maneuver as Dean flopped backwards and fell infront of the turnbuckle! CM Punk stepped through the ropes now, and began to climb the turnbuckle as Dean slowly moved on the floor. CM Punk stood on the top ropes and pointed to the roof in a tribute to Randy Savage, the taunt however interrupted by Ambrose as he leapt forwards and moved the top rope! Punk fell onto his private area and wheezed in pain whilst Ambrose quickly scrambled up the ropes and grabbed Punk by the head, two big strikes before Ambrose stood on the rope himself, yanking Punk up with him! The crowd stood as both men did on the top rope, Dean turning and looking behind him. With a swift grab of Punk's head, a huge super-plex! Both men came crashing to the ring mat as the crowd cheered with amazement! Dean Ambrose was the first to stir on the floor and crawled over to the ropes, grabbing the top rope and pulling himself to his feet. Dean stood and flicked his head back as the hair moved out of his face, Dean stumbling over to a corner where he stood. Turning around, Punk was on his knees. Dean performed his gun-shot taunt and charged for the knee trembler, Punk slipping out of the way! Dean was running at no-one and quickly turned around, he'd meet the arms of Punk who vaulted him over his shoulders! The Go to Sleep position was set, and Punk threw Dean over his shoulders, the knee connecting, but not as well as Punk would've hoped! Dean didn't go down though, instead falling backwards and through the middle of the ropes! Punk scrambled over but couldn't stop Dean falling and looked on the outside as Dean was on his knees. Punk slipped over to the ropes and leaned through to grab Ambrose. Dean revealed his intentions as he lifted a wrench from under the ring and smacked Punk in the cheek with the weapon, out of the referees sight. Punk fell backwards grabbing his face as Dean stood on the outside, grabbing his leather jacket and slowly walking away from the ring as the referee continued his count, Punk still rolling in pain! Dean had lost via count-out.


WINNER

CM Punk



Punk kneeled in the ring as Ambrose stood on the stage, obtaining a microphone from the editing booth to the right of the stage. Dean stood and was noticeably breathing heavily, so was Punk... Dean lifted the microphone to his lips as he stopped Punks music playing.


" Whoa, that's gotta hurt Punk, right?! You know what I just did Punk, I just opened this audiences eyes. They know they've got a new talent on their hands no matter how badly you all wanna keep it under wraps, you know I just shocked each and everyone of you. I could've stepped into that ring and preyed on Punk, finished the job and pinned his shoulders down, but now i've got a free schedule. I've got the time to sit around and wait for you to call me out. Wait for you to offer me round two, and when you do you'll be met by a new Dean Ambrose, one that doesn't hold back like he did today. You'll meet my monsters. "


Dean threw the microphone to the floor, turning and heading backstage as medics brushed past him to treat Punks jaw.


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As well as the debut of Dean Ambrose, the night of RAW was filled with other debuts. For the first time the WWE experienced the debut of Kassius Ohno, and he competed against Drew McIntyre, beating him. Mick Foley was made the general manager of RAW permanently aswell.


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Posted 27 June 2012 - 01:28 AM

All I have to say is...holy shit that was awesome.

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Posted 27 June 2012 - 12:47 PM

Okay i'll start as I read, not going to lie it was predictable and I could see a few people questioning him being a nobody and going after Punk but he has a agenda to take out the self proclaimed best in the WWE to show everyone that he is, the promo itself I felt was slightly watered down from his previous, there wasn't truly the "one lab accident away from being a super villain" which we had seen before, he had more of a agenda then incoherent rambling, it was like WWE had a word with him, it isn't a bad thing because I feel that this would work more in the WWE then the previous, its more now that he isn't going to snap if someone doesn't put sugar in his coffee for instance, hes more stabley unstable if you understand, personally I prefer it

The match itself was great, very detailed and thank god someone has debuted someone here and actually lost lol even if it was to prove a point, I didn't understand the wrench tho maybe im missing something or it was the first thing he grabbed, loved the agenda as Dean isn't actually going to feud with Punk its going to be the other way around, I would love for Punk to just go "Fine okay Ambrose i've beaten you so now Daniel I want my rematch" lol

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Posted 29 June 2012 - 12:45 PM

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NEXT WEEK ON MONDAY NIGHT RAW

CM PUNK INVOKES HIS REMATCH CLAUSE

- 30TH JULY 2012 -

- CM PUNK VS DANIEL BRYAN -

- WWE CHAMPIONSHIP -



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Posted 30 June 2012 - 03:07 PM

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' 1001st episode of monday night raw '

' monday the thirtieth of july, two thousand and twelve '

' chapter seven " ruining your chances " '

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8WEifK07hWk


With the theme song rolling fans inside the arena stand and watch. The credits eventually come to a close and the blood-red lit arena is graced by the traditional Monday night RAW firework display, a magical dose of colour spreading over the vicinity of the inside arena. Cameras on cranes slowly panned over the audience, members of the crowd fighting to get their face on TV to watch when they return home. Following a few zoom ins on signs, the camera changes to the image of Jerry Lawler and Michael Cole sitting at ringside, both with welcoming smiles as it all begins.


Micheal Cole

" Ladies and Gentlemen! You are joining us live on Monday Night RAW, we are one week removed from the one thousand episode spectacular! I'm your broadcast announcer Michael Cole joined my co-worker Jerry 'the King' Lawler! ...and tonight we get to see the match that never happened last week as the WWE Championship is on the line! "


Jerry Lawler

" Oh it's so exciting! CM Punk was ready to invoke his rematch clause last week, but the arrival of WWE debutant Dean Ambrose stopped the match and instead we saw CM Punk take on this new individual, and boy did Ambrose impress! "


Michael Cole

" I think Dean had that match in the bag, and he knew he was too good for Punk, that's why he walked away!... Dean Ambrose does make an appearance here tonight though as he takes on Heath Slater! The One Man Band! Woo! "


Jerry Lawler

" ...and also last week, Mick Foley was appointed the general manager in a big decision where the voting for the new GM came down to one percent! Our co-worker from SmackDown was just one percent from winning the spot, but he lost by little more than forty votes. I couldn't believe it! "



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- LATER IN THE SHOW -

- DEAN AMBROSE VERSUS HEATH SLATER -


With the crowd watching the ring as Heath Slater already stood in the center, Lillian Garcia would stand in the center and announce the first competitor. " First, already in the ring, hailing from Pineville, West Virginia!, weighing in at two hundred and sixteen pounds, the 'One Man Band' Heath Slater! " Heath bounced around in the ring, raising both arms in the air as his name was called. The fans clapped softly as he beckoned for more cheers, not receiving much more. The music of Heath soon faded away and his movement stopped as he physically gulped, obviously intimidated.


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The name 'Dean Ambrose' flashed on the titantron and the crowd rose to their feet as more noise was made, not cheers this time though. Cage the Elephants single echoed throughout the arena and small cheers were heard amongst the boos as Dean Ambrose stepped out from the back in his charcoal jacket, his hair its usually soaked consistency. Slowly he walked to the edge of the stage, taking a bow before he began to edge down the ramp, watching the crowd who stuck out their hands with disgust. Stepping to his left he darted up a flight of stairs and onto the apron " and his opponent, from Cincinnati, Ohio, weighing in at two hundred and twenty-five pounds, Dean Ambrose! " Hopping through the apron as the ring cleared of camera crews and announcers, Dean stepped into his corner as Heath slowly bounced on his toes, watching. The referee sounded for the bell immediately, we are underway.


' MATCH STARTS '


The sound of the bell was like a starting gate for Ambrose, and as soon as the sound begun he was across the ring in a flash, grabbing Slater by the shoulder before he could even talk trash and repeatedly striking him in the face. Slater fell backwards into a corner and Ambrose continued, the referee sticking his arm in-between them for a count for five, one that Ambrose didn't ignore. Wrapping his arms around the wrists of a dazzled Heath, Ambrose used his brute force to Irish whip the 'one man band' across to the opposite corner. Slater sprinted across the ring and his back collided with the padded turnbuckle, winding him a little as he stumbled out. Ambrose leaped forwards with a big clothesline that dropped Heath down hard. Slater seemed to get his senses back from the drop and immediately sat up, turning to his left as he grabbed for the ring ropes... Ambrose watched from across the ring as Heath scrambled upwards, turning and charging at 'street dog'. With Slater posing a threat with his charge, Ambrose quickly side-stepped and allowed Slater to hit the turnbuckle that Ambrose stood at. Heath again stumbled from the blocks, this time Dean wrapping two arms around the left leg of Slater and vaulting him up and over, Slater crashing down on his face. The match was looking to close already as Ambrose took a few steps towards Slater, lifting him up by his hair, bad move. Heath began to strike the abdomen of Dean, once! twice! three times! but it's cancelled out by a gross knee from Ambrose who took the strikes like they were nothing. With Heath falling to his knees, Ambrose took three steps back into the corner. Grabbing his right knee-pad and pushing it down to expose the bare knee, Ambrose looked up and made a gun-pose with his fingers 'shooting' Slater! With that taunt, Ambrose charged forwards with the running knee-trembler, a knee to the side of the head! Regal-esque right there! Dropping for the cover! One! Two! Three!


WINNER

Dean Ambrose


Looking up from the mat with an evil smile, Dean stood and without accepting the referees offer for an arm raise he immediately left the ring. Stepping up the ramp at a sprinters pace, Dean didn't even look back... he stepped behind the entrance curtain as camera focus turned to Slater, still slumped on the ring mat, out cold.



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- THE MAIN EVENT -

- DANIEL BRYAN VERSUS CM PUNK -

- WWE CHAMPIONSHIP -


We're late on in this match here and Punk is in full control! Bryan looks to lose his title before he's even won it! The match is in full flow as Punk stands atop the top rope with arms pointed to the sky, the leaping elbow drop connects! Punk paying tribute to Savage! With the connection, Punk quickly covered! One! Two! No! Bryan struggled out of the attempt and sat up, Punk standing and connecting with a kick to Bryan's chest! This was looking very one-sided! Punk then quickly needed this job done, grabbing Bryan and hoisting him up to his feet. That sequence to be followed by another as an Irish whip by Punk on Bryan into the corner, and Punk takes a step back into the opposite. Charging forward, Punk hits his trademark elevated knee to the skull of Bryan, followed up by the trademark bulldog! The crowd are really into this as Punk turns to them, arms spread as he shouts 'BEST IN THE WORLD' to the audience. Attention back on the match, Punk continues by dragging Bryan to his feet, Punk stood infront of the 'American Dragon' before swinging a right hand, then a left hand! Spinning back-hand from Punk! Followed by the high-kick! The KENTA combo working out beautifully as Bryan slumped to the floor in a heap. The crowd watched as Punk ran his hand over his hair, standing behind the carcass of Bryan whilst doing his 'wake-up taunt' the crocodile hands as he awaited the moment for his GTS. Instead Bryan remained down, Punk still on the prowl as he stared at the back of Bryan's head. This was surely over if this worked!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WddxxXgCLT4


Oh no, not this! The theme music of AJ played and Punks attention was dragged for a second before he decided to focus on Bryan again, ignoring whatever she was doing... the boo's however did grasp his attention as Dean Ambrose was the one who emerged instead, with an arm wrapped around the neck of AJ. Punk quickly walked over to the ropes as he stared at the duo, Dean Ambrose holding both of AJ's cheeks with his hands. CM Punk began to grow frustrated, turning around to see Bryan on his knees. As he went to return focus to the match, Ambrose pulled a microphone to the mouth of AJ, letting her speak. " Help Punk! Please! I'm sorry Punk! Please! Please help me! He's gonna hurt me! I'm begging Punk! " The words of AJ gripped Punk as he turned around, back to the ropes again as Dean threw down the microphone. Instead of Punk exiting the ring however, Bryan rolled him up from behind! One! Two! Three! No way! He's stolen it!


WINNER

Daniel Bryan


With that pinfall, Dean released AJ and she collapsed onto the stage on her hands and knees, leaving her to cough towards the floor whilst Ambrose strolled behind the curtain. Meanwhile Daniel Bryan grabbed his title mid-ring, arms aloft as he celebrated! The crowd booed massively as Punk remained on his knees, holding his head in frustration as he turned to AJ on the stage, shaking his head. With the show looking like it had ended, Punk decided to make one thing known as he caught a distracted Daniel Bryan as he celebrated, hoisting him over the shoulders! Go To Sleep time! Bryan was thrown over the shoulders and onto the knee as Punk wiped the sweat from his face, the show ending with AJ still on the stage, looking as if she was crying.


Edited by UncleCreepy., 30 June 2012 - 04:11 PM.


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Posted 30 June 2012 - 08:22 PM

I really liked this up to the end, possibly the worst feud you could get into with Ambrose, the match with Slater was just a jobbing match but I didn't expect another big ol' match again but bringing AJ into it just really let me down, I was thinking it was going to be something edgy or maybe screwing punk out but the AJ feud in general is just really bad, it felt kind of a cheap way, Ambrose comes off like he has to leave his mark on his opponent not by screwing them but by actually leaving his mark, in blood, bruised body or whatever something to make them remember him by, I would of thought Ambrose wouldn't have to use AJ at all, just let me down as I thought the feud would of been just purely them two and maybe Bryan possibly maybe because I despise AJ so much, its the worst feud they have done in forever and after massive hopes for Ambrose it looks like hes slipped into it, even if its nothing more then just using her once it feels kind of desperate for Ambrose

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Posted 30 June 2012 - 08:31 PM

Considering i'm going off current WWE events, AJ is a big part of the storyline and I can't just drop her from it. Ambrose is a "get his hands dirty" kind of guy, but he's also great with mind games. AJ is part of the Punk/Bryan story whether I like it or not and didn't visualize how she'd just drop from it considering at the moment she's the centerpiece. She is included in the plans for the storyline I have set though, and I currently believe this is a more 'realistic' route to go down. Ambrose was never going to just have Punk notice him straight off the bat but by using AJ, someone Punk obviously cares about, I believe that's more sick and twisted than just a pure beatdown on Punk... I do still take what you say into consideration, but with the current plans I have, AJ is important.

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Posted 30 June 2012 - 08:48 PM

Considering i'm going off current WWE events, AJ is a big part of the storyline and I can't just drop her from it. Ambrose is a "get his hands dirty" kind of guy, but he's also great with mind games. AJ is part of the Punk/Bryan story whether I like it or not and didn't visualize how she'd just drop from it considering at the moment she's the centerpiece. She is included in the plans for the storyline I have set though, and I currently believe this is a more 'realistic' route to go down. Ambrose was never going to just have Punk notice him straight off the bat but by using AJ, someone Punk obviously cares about, I believe that's more sick and twisted than just a pure beatdown on Punk... I do still take what you say into consideration, but with the current plans I have, AJ is important.


But AJ currently like she is, Ambrose will become the new Kane and the whole feuding will become a massive circle again of who will she like, who wont she, its like a really bad soap opera, fading her into the background would of helped get this feud of the ground, nobody will really go "Wheres AJ gone?" because its Ambrose vs Punk, having Ambrose use AJ as a pawn and get her involved just so Punk focuses on Ambrose just loses the magic of what could of been a massive feud, I understand the realism but you don't have to go off current events but like I said AJ will end up falling for Ambrose if this was real, maybe its just I hate AJ and the current story line so much

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Posted 30 June 2012 - 10:25 PM

I see where SRNR is coming from, but in all honesty I like the realism. If anything, it's making me appreciate the storyline more. I'm hoping that since Ambrose is more focused on Punk than the WWE title, Bryan'll just fade back and feud with someone else for the title (which I'm assuming you won't cover seeing as how this revolves around Ambrose). I'm also sure AJ is going to fit inI think Punk vs. Ambrose would be a great match in real life, so I'm excited to see it happen here. Ambrose's debut is the one thing I'm actually hyped for in WWE at the moment, so I'll continue following as I know this has amazing potential.

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Posted 01 July 2012 - 10:53 AM

The 1000th Raw was brilliant. Punk's promo to start us off was good and it was kept realistic. The Ambrose promo was excellent, a really good way to introduce his character. I said in an earlier post that I'm not a fan of Ambrose being immediately put into a feud with Punk, an established main eventer. I still don't think it's the best route you could have gone but you've handled it really well. The match itself was the great too, very detailed. TBH, I feared you would put Ambrose over which would kind of be unrealistic but Punk getting the un-decisive win was the best way to go IMO.

A clean win for Ambrose was a good decision, even though I don't know how Slater became a face haha. An Ambrose interference in the Punk/Bryan was inevitable but logical so you made the right choice. I hope AJ doesn't play a huge part in the feud as I don't think she's needed but I'm interested to see where you're going with this.

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Posted 01 July 2012 - 03:19 PM

Thanks all for the responses, next episode will be up later and as always, feedback will be returned when you have new episodes. Cheers.

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