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MOXLEY/AMBROSE - UPLOADED! Render shots added.

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#1 Angel With The Burnt Wings

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Posted 05 December 2011 - 07:57 PM

UPLOADED

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I will upload this with the render once I have Xbox Live again.
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4 Attires:
Hair 1 Attire 1
Hair 1 Attire 2
Hair 2 Attire 1
Hair 2 Attire 2

Edited by LEGENDKILLER., 08 May 2012 - 10:54 AM.


#2 Petos

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Posted 05 December 2011 - 09:49 PM

The hair looks pretty cool, albeit a bit too dark. The face however is completely off. Looks nothing like him to be honest. You really need to completely rework the face and study the ref pics closely while you're at it. I will give you props for the hair though.

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Posted 05 December 2011 - 10:12 PM

Thanks for the feedback, I am still working on the face. I have added attire pics.

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Posted 05 December 2011 - 10:37 PM

I like the attire. I can help out a bit with the face if you want.

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Posted 05 December 2011 - 10:41 PM

I like the attire. I can help out a bit with the face if you want.


Any suggestions would be great.

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Posted 05 December 2011 - 11:04 PM

Focus on the eyes first, they seem to be the biggest problem you've got so far. Increase angle on them, his eyes aren't that slanted down.

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Posted 05 December 2011 - 11:28 PM

You may find something in this to help you

http://www.mediafire...ld1clg3d3yci4ae

#8 Angel With The Burnt Wings

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Posted 06 December 2011 - 01:07 AM

You may find something in this to help you

http://www.mediafire...ld1clg3d3yci4ae


I'm on my iPhone at the minute so I can't open it yet, but what is it?

EDIT: Just opened it up, thanks alot man, these will be VERY helpful. :)

Face update added.

Edited by LEGENDKILLER., 06 December 2011 - 12:11 AM.


#9 Angel With The Burnt Wings

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Posted 06 December 2011 - 07:44 AM

Bump

#10 Angel With The Burnt Wings

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Posted 06 December 2011 - 07:02 PM

Bump, again. Come on guys I need suggestions! :)

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Posted 06 December 2011 - 09:08 PM

Probably the best Ambrose thus far man! Great work! If I could make a few suggestions! How about arching the nose up a bit, then increasing the nose height a bit, and widening it just a little bit. Next I would put the eye makeup on then darkens his eyes to make it look like he hasn't slept much and there you go!!

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Posted 06 December 2011 - 09:08 PM

Dude, check the link in your sig.

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#13 Angel With The Burnt Wings

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Posted 07 December 2011 - 12:09 AM

Updated. Suggestions welcome.

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Posted 07 December 2011 - 01:58 PM

Looking good. You should do an alt. attire with the same trunks but with longer hair like in that last ref pic.

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Posted 07 December 2011 - 03:44 PM

I will look into a alt with a different hair style, and see what fits.

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Posted 07 December 2011 - 03:52 PM

The skin you're using makes him look too old. Use eye make-up or just change the skin altogether. And make the eyes closer together.

Increase height on nose, and decrease nostril height, and depth and then make the angle of the nose lower.

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#17 Angel With The Burnt Wings

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Posted 07 December 2011 - 07:24 PM

The skin you're using makes him look too old. Use eye make-up or just change the skin altogether. And make the eyes closer together.

Increase height on nose, and decrease nostril height, and depth and then make the angle of the nose lower.


Thanks for the suggestions I will post an update later on tonight.

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#18 Phenolicious

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Posted 07 December 2011 - 11:56 PM

Getting there. Less width on the nose, and less nostril height. Increase height of the nose, and then increase nostril width. Angle the nose down a bit.

And bring the eyes closer together, but not too much.

Decrease outline of the jaw, and see if reducing the upper line will do any help.

Edited by Phenolicious, 07 December 2011 - 11:57 PM.


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Posted 10 December 2011 - 03:11 PM

Thanks for the suggestions again. Will post an update soon with more attires.

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Posted 10 December 2011 - 04:47 PM

I used skin 12 on my Moxley and it came out pretty good. I suggest skin 12.





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