Last Stand of a King/SES Crusade

[xkingdazzx]

My name is xkingdazzx and I along with a friend of mine are writing a series on xbox live called Last Stand of a King and SES Crusade. Last Stand is the Raw portion of the brand, and SES Crusade is the Smackdown part. Each show is run just like they are in real life complete with multiple story lines/feuds and diverse rosters. I want you to know that we pay a strict attention to dialogue and production. Below is the roster for our stories.

[b]Last Stand (RAW) Roster:[/b]
MVP (WWE Champ)
John Cena
Triple H
HBK
Chris Jericho
The Miz (US CHamp)
William Regal
Sheamus
Christian
Vance Archer
Cody Rhodes (WWE Tag Champ)
Dolph Ziggler (WWE Tag Champ)
Shelton Benjamin
Kofi Kingston
Ezekial Jackson
Mark Henry
Santino Marella
Yoshi Tatsu
Evan Bourne

[b]Last Stand (RAW) Tag Teams:[/b]
Dashing Perfection (Ziggler and Rhodes)
Athletic Standard (Benjamin and Kofi)
The United Kingdom (Regal and Sheamus)

[b]SES Crusade (Smackdown Roster):[/b]
Undertaker (World Heavyweight Champ)
Kane
Edge
CM Punk
Orton
Mysterio
Batista
Mcintyre
Hart Dynasty
JTG
Swagger
Morrision
Big Show
R Truth
Gallows
Kozlov
Dibiase
Goldust
Finlay
Ryder

[b]SES Crusade (Smackdown Tag Teams):[/b]
SES (CM Punk, Kozlov, Dibiase, Gallows)
Evolved (Batista and Mcintyre)
Hart Dynasty

Just to give a little taste of what happens on the start of the shows. Here is a little preview:

[b]Last Stand of A King[/b]
What will the United States Champion the Miz have to say about his helping King Regal end the career of Stone Cold the night before on Smackdown?

New Superstar Vance Archer has a secret arrangement with the WWE Officials that gives him a distinct advantage over all other superstars. Christian is the first to find out.

The show isnt complete without some Dashing tips from Dashing Cody Rhodes.

Who is the WWE Champion after Summerslam? Has John Cena finally defeated MVP, or has MVP successfully defended the title and made more ground in his war against repetition?

[b]SES Crusade[/b]
The Smackdown titles are vacant, and all Smackdown superstars are fighting for the chance to appear in the Ladder match for the IC and World Heavyweight titles. Names included (CM Punk, Swagger, Undertaker, Orton, Kane, Rey Mysterio)

CM Punk begins his crusade against the non believers, and adding new recruits along the way.

Those are just snippets of what these show offer. I hope you guys will check them out. I hope you enjoy!
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**Also Part two and part 3 are already up in the community creations. In case your wondering which order to play them in: Last Stand of a King, SES Crusade, Last Stand/SES Crusade, Last Stand/SES Crusad2, and lastly Last Stand/SES Crusad3. Just to get rid of any confusion**
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[xkingdazzx]

Just to give you a little sample of the type of writing I do, here is a clip from my Last Stand Story.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kFJtUV_kAv4

Here is a little taste of what my friends writing is like.

[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dZ9jnr6YGsg[/media]

So with this I hope will go and give our stories a try. We worked really hard on these and would like others to tell me how us how we did. Plus, stories only get better when there is more demand.

Remember the tags for his are: SES Crusade, and Mine is Last Stand of a King. Or you can download our combined stories at Last Stand/SES Crusad, or Last Stand/SES Crusa2. You wont be disappointed.

[xkingdazzx]

Anybody wanna chime in, and let me know how these are? These are good stories. Just give em a chance and Im sure you will like them.

[Muur]

How long is it?

[xkingdazzx]

Each upload is 4 shows a piece. The combined uploads are 8 shows a piece.

[Red Blooded Samurai K]

Nice I like it so far are you going to upload anymore to the story?

[xkingdazzx]

Right now I only have just the part 1 and 2 done. This is a really busy time with semesters ending, so it will take me a couple weeks to get the next two ready. Since we both use the same xbox to create our stories it could take a week or two to dish out the next few parts.

Im glad you like it though.

[xkingdazzx]

Has anybody checked this out? Let me know what you think.

[xkingdazzx]

About half way through the next installment of these two series. So if you havent checked it out, you dont know what your missing. After I upload this one, I will start making summaries for each episode.

So check it out.
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**Also let me know if there any stories you would like me to play and review in exchange for playing and reviewing mine.

Happy Thanksgiving!

[xkingdazzx]

[quote name='thurlow' timestamp='1291328172' post='7770746']
[quote name='xkingdazzx' timestamp='1291066501' post='7764622']
If you want you can check out the Last Stand of a King/SES Crusade series. They are not RTWMs but they contain some pretty good storytelling and dialogue.

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[/quote]

This has been fun to play, I've played through The SES Crusade and The PPV and First Week of Last Stand of THe king/SES only reason I've stopped is so I can give someone elses a try plus I downloaded the wrong version I think of Last Stand of the king cause it goes straight into HIAC PPV, but anyways like how you've worked it and done full shows for Raw and SD with various fueds/Storylines. For what I've played so far would rate it 9 out of 10 so anyone who's on XBOX and got Live go and download this one cause its good, has not got stale and get to play as various Superstars
[/quote]


Thanks for such high regard. My friend and I worked really hard on those stories and really appreciate the good review.

[thurlow]

[quote name='xkingdazzx' timestamp='1291333452' post='7770949']
[quote name='thurlow' timestamp='1291328172' post='7770746']
[quote name='xkingdazzx' timestamp='1291066501' post='7764622']
If you want you can check out the Last Stand of a King/SES Crusade series. They are not RTWMs but they contain some pretty good storytelling and dialogue.

tags: xkingdazzx
[/quote]

This has been fun to play, I've played through The SES Crusade and The PPV and First Week of Last Stand of THe king/SES only reason I've stopped is so I can give someone elses a try plus I downloaded the wrong version I think of Last Stand of the king cause it goes straight into HIAC PPV, but anyways like how you've worked it and done full shows for Raw and SD with various fueds/Storylines. For what I've played so far would rate it 9 out of 10 so anyone who's on XBOX and got Live go and download this one cause its good, has not got stale and get to play as various Superstars
[/quote]


Thanks for such high regard. My friend and I worked really hard on those stories and really appreciate the good review.
[/quote]

Was just coming in here to say my thoughts in this topic, but you got my quote in here already, but to anyone else it is really good and reccmed the download

[Y2Jerishow]

Sounds a good story but you should change Sheamus and Regal's team name.

Ireland is NOT in the UK, I really hate when people think or just decide they are

I'm not even Irish and I hate it.

Still back to the point story sounds and looks good.

[xkingdazzx]

[quote name='Y2Jerishow' timestamp='1291411260' post='7772288']
Sounds a good story but you should change Sheamus and Regal's team name.

Ireland is NOT in the UK, I really hate when people think or just decide they are

I'm not even Irish and I hate it.

Still back to the point story sounds and looks good.
[/quote]

I am aware of this. But the name of my team "United Kingdom" does not represent the real UK. It represents two Kings from different countries who united under one kingdom (Regal was actually King of RAW in my previous story). Believe me I know. The creator of the SES Crusade who is indeed Irish, has reminded me several times about this.

[xkingdazzx]

Does anyone know a way to get around the "NO DLC IN COMMUNITY CREATIONS CAN BE UPLOADED" rule? I found this really great Sting and I was thinking about using him in my story but the rule above made me decide against it. I would make it myself, but I've always found it to be too difficult with the logos and facepaint.

If anybody knows please let me know. If not its fine.

Anyway, downloads are gradually building up. Thanks for the downloads and please continue to play and rate these series'.

Also for those of you who have played any of these, let me know what you think we did wrong, or what worked the best. Detailed feedback is always the best and is greatly appreciated.

[Legend_Killer79]

Unfortunately, I think that only happens on XBOX.

I mean, I have a PS3 and I was already able to use a Downloaded Bret Hart CAW (after asking permission to the creator) ad it uploaded nicely.

Did you check if that Sting had any Downloaded Moveset or any Paint Tool Logo as a Sign Card?

[xkingdazzx]

[quote name='Legend_Killer79' timestamp='1292013876' post='7785151']
Unfortunately, I think that only happens on XBOX.

I mean, I have a PS3 and I was already able to use a Downloaded Bret Hart CAW (after asking permission to the creator) ad it uploaded nicely.

Did you check if that Sting had any Downloaded Moveset or any Paint Tool Logo as a Sign Card?
[/quote]

I dont know what it is. Well you guys only got to have 50 scenes last year so I guess this is the disadvantage we get this year.

Kinda goofy though. There should be an option to allow your DLC to be involved in another persons story, not just the one rule and everyone must follow deal. Oh well thanks for the suggestion, but I'll just have to make my own when I get the time.

[xkingdazzx]

Just want to let everybody know that Part 3 of Last Stand/SES Crusade is now available for download.

[b]Preview for the Last Stand of a King (RAW) Portion:[/b]
Not only is MVP celebrating his recent title defense, but the WWE is doing so by dedicating the entire Monday Night RAW complete with tribute vids, and in ring celebrations to its favorite VIP Champion.

RAWs deep tag team division starts off with a bang when the new champs Athletic Standard (Shelton and Kofi) take on Dashing Perfection (Rhodes and Ziggler). Will the United Kingdom (Regal and Sheamus) be able to sit idly by and watch as these two teams get a chance to shine?

Cena shifts focus towards the man who cost him a shot at the WWE Championship. The Miz.

HHH returns to get his revenge on the culprits who put him on the shelf for 4 months. Will Jericho be able to talk his way out of this one, and shift all the blame on MVP?

[b]Preview for the SES Crusade (Smackdown) Portion:[/b]
Ted Jr.'s recent failures to bring results have brought much embarrassment to Punk and fellow SES members Kozlov and Gallows. Tonight they are going to bring a message to Ted Jr in front of the WWE Universe.

Will Evolved (Batista and Mcintyre) finally step away from the club scene to defend their tag team titles against the rest of the Smackdown roster?

Punk's growing frustration with Teddy Long continues as he is overlooked by the Smackdown GM for the Heavyweight Title Race.

Orton takes on the World Heavyweight Champion Undertaker in the the Main event. Will Punk and Edge sit by as there championship hopes grow stronger?


Go out and download the full story to see what happens. I guarantee you wont be disappointed.
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Enjoy! And dont forget to comment and leave a review. Its greatly appreciated.

[xkingdazzx]

[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nxoV9FYLXlA[/media]

Go out and download the Xbox exclusive "Baller Babies" Fan club president CAW, "Marcus", and become a member of the Unofficial, Official, MVP's Baller Babies fan club!
Also you get 4 costumes, full moveset, and entrance with this one download, so act fast.


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[Alonzi Alonso!]

nice story. but there are a few grammr/punctuation errors..

i'll be looking forward to any more work you guys do.

[xkingdazzx]

[quote name='Alonzi Alonso!' timestamp='1294327948' post='7838574']
nice story. but there are a few grammr/punctuation errors..

i'll be looking forward to any more work you guys do.
[/quote]

Thank you Alonzi Alonso! for taking the time to play our story, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you wanna get updates for any new releases, just send me friend invite on Xbox live.

Also, I'll try to be more careful with the errors next time.

[Rated R]

Did you add the Nexus or can they be added? I'm getting Xbl this month soo I'll download it then

[xkingdazzx]

Originally I had plans for the nexus, but since stories containing DLC(Nexus, or any downloaded legends) cannot be uploaded, I went in another direction. Plus I dont really have the time to make CAWS of them.

But dont let that steer you away, because Im sure you will enjoy the various different storylines that we were able to come up with.

[xkingdazzx]

Interested in knowing who are the big players, and the lower guys in our stories. Look no further...well, except below. Also they are listed as heels and faces. Heels are underlined.

[b][size="5"]Last Stand of A King(RAW)[/size][/b]
[b]Main Eventers[/b]
[spoiler][u]MVP[/u]
John Cena
Triple
HBK
[u]Chris Jericho[/u]
[/spoiler]
[b]Upper Card (possible Main eventers)[/b]
[spoiler][u]Sheamus
Regal
Miz[/u]
Big Zeke
[u]Marcus[/u] (Baller Babies Fan club Prez)
[/spoiler]
[b]Mid Card[/b]
[spoiler]Shelton
Kofi Kingston
[u]Dolph Ziggler
Cody Rhodes
Yoshi [/u]
Christian
[u]Vance Archer[/u][/spoiler]

[b]Lower Card[/b]
[spoiler]Evan Bourne
Santino
Mark Henry[/spoiler]


[size="5"][b]SES Crusade(Smackdown)[/b][/size]
[b]
Main Eventers
[spoiler][/b]
[u]CM Punk[/u]
Orton
Undertaker
[u]Kane
Batista
Mcintyre[/u]
Mysterio
[u]Edge[/u]
Goldust(Recently)
[/spoiler]
[b]Upper Card[/b]
[spoiler][u]Swagger[/u]
Morrison
Show
R Truth
Hardy[/spoiler]

[b]Mid Card[/b]
[spoiler][u]Gallows
Kozlov[/u]
Dibiase
[/spoiler]
[b]Lower Card[/b]
[spoiler]JTG
Zach Ryder
Hart Dynasty[/spoiler]

Also here are the current factions in these stories
[b]Last Stand (RAW)[/b]
[u]VIP[/u]
MVP, Jericho, and Marcus

[u]United Kingdom[/u]
Regal, Sheamus, and Finlay
[b]
SES Crusade(Smackdown)[/b]
[u]Straight Edge Society[/u]
CM Punk, Gallows, Edge, Kozlov

Evolved
Batista, Mcintyre

Anyway, thats everyones current worth in these stories, and factions involved. If you wanna see them in action, go out and download these stories. You wont be disappointed. Enjoy!
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[xkingdazzx]

[size="5"][b]Last Stand of a King/SES Crusade 4 has just been uploaded![/b][/size]

[u]Last Stand of a King(RAW)[/u]

MVP and his fan club Baller Babies embarrassed HBK at Survivor Series. The next night on RAW Marcus and MVP proceed with festivities in the ring. They are interupted by HBK who announces either MVP give him a rematch for the title, or HBK will face the untrained and inexperienced Marcus in the ring.

The United Kingdom (Regal and Sheamus) strike fear into the tag team division. They quickly make it known that anyone who steps in their way will be disposed of. Big Zeke and Christian seek to test that theory.

Former US Champion lost the title to Cena last night at Survivor Series. As Cena celebrates on RAW, Miz interrupts with a loophole in last nights decision that could cause that match to ruled a no contest. Thus forcing Cena to give back the title.

[u]SES Crusade(Smackdown)[/u]
CM Punk and the SES continue their two front war, as they take on Rey and the newly super heroed Goldust one side, and their political front against Teddy Long.

Anarchy ensues as the rejuvenated Kane feuds with the Undertaker.

Jack Swagger, Big Show, and John Morrison continue their fight over the Intercontinental champion. Though a superstar by the name of Todo Americano brings a certain advantage to Jack Swagger.

Evolved(Batista and Mcintyre) continue their reign as the most dominant tag champs on SD. Winning and partying is their priority.



I have to say that this is definitely some of the best work I have ever done. I personally gurantee that the RAW portion(mine) is fantastic and has absolutely no chance of disappointment. The match cards and storylines, the use of the Baller Babies fan club are just great.
If your looking for something new and different, it is definitely in this story.

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Also Last Stand/SES Crusad3 is currently a five star rated story. Thanks for the great reviews, and please continue to download and rate. Dont forget to download the Baller Babies fan club president as well. Enjoy!

[xkingdazzx]

I just wanna start off by saying thank you to all who have downloaded our stories. Feedback has been nothing short of five star so far(Rhyme ). Right now they are some of the highest rated stories on community creations.

Thanks for the downloads, and such high praise. I hope you continue to enjoy our stories.