Nico bellic

[Arjun The Man]

[center][size="5"][u][b]Niko Bellic The Gta 4 Legend is Back[/b][/u][/size]

[img]http://i51.tinypic.com/aotlyr.jpg[/img]

Sorry if the image is unclear
[b]this is my first caw so please comment gta fans[/b]
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[Vapor]

Good for a first CAW. But I can clearly see that it's your first CAW. Do something to the mustache, remove the yellow makeup above his eyes (I can see it!) and make the eyebrows more angry. Welcome to Caws.Ws

[Arjun The Man]

[quote name='mrx796' timestamp='1287853264' post='7668428']
Good for a first CAW. But I can clearly see that it's your first CAW. Do something to the mustache, remove the yellow makeup above his eyes (I can see it!) and make the eyebrows more angry. Welcome to Caws.Ws
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Ok

[Arjun The Man]

[img]http://i54.tinypic.com/6jhd2q.jpg[/img]

Now how is it

[Vapor]

I'm gonna give you more specific suggestions on the face now (not on the attire or body):
- Looks if there's a better hair
- Change the eyebrows
- Remove the grey areas around his eyes, but if you want to keep them, at least make them less transparent
- Make the eyes brighter
- Move the eyes less close to each other
- Add just a bit more positive angle to the eyes (makes them more angry looking)
- Change skin texture and remove the scars
- Make the sideburns a bit darker
- Move the nose more up in the face
- Less nose width and less nose angle (it's points too up)
- Change the lips color
- Change skin color (I don't know if it's because of the pics, but it looks yellow)
- Make the grey beard more transparent and make the mustache less transparent and the same grey as the beard
- Make the ears a bit smaller

It's a lot of suggestions, but if you do these, you'll have one fine Niko Bellic.