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#1 jlam331

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Posted 10 October 2007 - 04:07 AM

Here is my first caw Undertaker....lookin for ways to improve so feel free to leave comments and suggestions

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Edited by jlam331, 10 October 2007 - 04:42 AM.


#2 Cpt. Spaulding

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Posted 10 October 2007 - 04:31 AM

These links don't work either....

#3 W.s.S?

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Posted 10 October 2007 - 07:39 AM

They work for me... again..

From what I can see the face is quite good, I would suggest you use a different camera or turn down the brightness because you can't see much at all... The attire and tats look rushed so spend more time on them...

Edited by ShadowXD, 10 October 2007 - 08:42 PM.


#4 Cpt. Spaulding

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Posted 10 October 2007 - 10:13 AM

They work for me... again..

From what I can see the face isn't too good, I would suggest you use a different camera or turn down the brightness because you can't see much at all... The attire and tats look rushed so spend more time on them...


Well they work now, but they didn't before, wise guy.

#5 Gio The Don

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Posted 10 October 2007 - 02:45 PM

this looks alot better than your cena caw! the face looks quite good although it needs a bit of work im not quite sure where but its a good start. For the attire i would change the gloves and make the colour a tad darker. Hope the suggestions help

#6 jlam331

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Posted 10 October 2007 - 10:34 PM

ok thanks man, ill work on that....btw im makin all these for online except for the cena cuz i just went ahead and used logos for the attire so thats y the tats pretty much blow cuz im tryin to do all this without usin logos...

Edited by jlam331, 11 October 2007 - 02:50 AM.


#7 Truly Sick

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Posted 11 October 2007 - 09:47 AM

Looks good man :)

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Posted 24 October 2007 - 03:52 PM

I would make the colour darker. And try & find some replacement bottoms,

:offtopic: Put the actual year/s he dressed like this cause I thought it was his debut attire

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Posted 30 December 2008 - 08:28 AM

cool